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Law, say the Gardeners, is the sun.
When you rise first with the dawn
you know what is to be born alone
As the Gardener carves his plants to shape
with plans of blooming before the fall of night,
when the land has but a little goodness left,
clinging to that fighting sky.
But I, I will learn the way of flight;
to be a flower that knows the law
better than it knows the dirt and dark;
to be a rose in its fullest bloom,
with beauty flitting in brilliant sparks.
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- I'm a moonstone path poet for 519 comments.
- I am a 20 year old guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm an Artist and Writer.
- Visit my homepage at www.theeverlastingfallout.com/read
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babyliz : hi on December 26, 2007Thank you for the constructive criticism ^_^ I like how you did with my poem...I'll keep your advice in mind...
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BloodSuckingAngel on December 20, 2007hi i thank you for your comment on my works and i did move my friends name away from the peice she wrote but im sorry if i spelt stuff wrong i suck at spelling
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This author is a 2007 Raven Contest Qualifier double honorable mention winner.
