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Eternal PainShow poetry

Hey ya, im Adele, 13 year old ^^. Hope u would all comment on my poems and i'll try to improve on them, im onli a 13 year old after all =D My poems are mostly based on thoughts and some are personal, from my life.Kinda like a diary, which everyone can read, lols. Some of them just reflect a part of me. Anyways, im finding an AP family too!! Feel free to leave me a message if you want to be in my AP family .

[ AP family ]

-YoureNoGoodForMe (sister) Great poet, read her profile and poems at http://allpoetry.com/YoureNoGoodForMe

-Immortal Obscurity (sister) Hahas, great person, read her profile and poems at http://allpoetry.com/Immortal%20Obscurity

-Walls-within (sister) Sweet person, hahas, read her profile and poems at http://allpoetry.com/Walls-within

-Shimano (Best Friend) Someone who understands and can relate well to me. Noble person indeed. Get to know her at http://allpoetry.com/Shimano

I'm sorry

Im sorry if I don't meet your standards
I'm sorry if I'm not skinny enough for you to see my ribs
I'm sorry if I'm not pretty enough to be "your girl".
I'm sorry if I'm not taned enough for you
I'm sorry if I'm weird
I'm sorry that I write about you every day
I'm sorry if i don't have a dream body that turns you on.
I'm sorry if im not tall enough.
I'm sorry if I'm annoying
I'm sorry if my hair is not long enough.
I'm sorry that im different from those other girls
I'm sorry i won't hang all over you, and be a complete tramp to make you happy.
I'm sorry that I actually care about you
and actually call to see how you're doing.

But most of all...

I'm sorry that most guys can't accept a girl for who they really are.
If you're a girl and you agree with this letter, repost as "I'm sorry".
If you're one of the FEW GUYS with enough courage to repost and you would never make your girl feel this way, repost as "I love you just the way you are".

To every guy...

To every guy that's said, "Sex CAN wait"
To every guy that's said, "You're beautiful."
To every guy that was never too busy to drive across town to see her.
To every guy that gives flowers and a card when she is sick.
To every guy who has given her flowers just because.
To every guy that said he would die for her.
To every guy that really would.
To every guy that took time to do what she wanted to do.
To every guy that she cried in front of.
To every guy that holds hands with her.
To every guy that kisses her with meaning.
To every guy that hugs her when she's sad.
To every guy that hugs her for no reason at all.
To every guy who would give their jacket up for her.
To every guy that calls to make sure she got home safe.
To every guy that would sit and wait for her for hours just to see her for ten minutes.
To every guy that would give his seat up.
To every guy that just wants to cuddle.
To every guy that reassured her that she was beautiful no matter what.
To every guy who told his secrets to her.
To every guy that tried to show how much he cared through every word and every breath.
To every guy that thought maybe this could be the one.
To every guy that believed in her dreams.
To every guy that would have done anything so she could achieve them.
To every guy that never laughed at her when she told him her dreams.
To every guy that walked her to her car.
To every guy that gave his heart.
To every guy who prays that she is happy even if you are not with her.

...This one bulletin is for you...

Not many girls appreciate nice guys anymore...
And because of this, there are not many left out there...

I guarantee 90% of the men on your page will not repost this cuz they care more about their image

If you are a nice guy repost this with "We're a Dying Breed "

If you are a girl that thinks every guy should treat a girl this way
repost this with: "To Every Guy..."

To every girl.

To every girl that is SCARED to put her heart out there again, because she has been HURT too many times.
To every girl that dresses cute, not skanky.
To every girl who wants to be called beautiful, not hot.
To every girl that will spend her whole day looking for the perfect present for you.
To every girl that would die to have a decent boyfriend.
To every girl who would just once like to be treated like a princess.
To every girl that just wants to hold hands.
To every girl that kisses him with meaning.
TO EVERY GIRL WHO JUST WISHES HE CARED MORE.
To every girl who just once, wants a guy to give their jacket up when she is cold.
To every girl who just wants him to call.
To every girl who lies awake at night thinking about him.
To every girl that just wants to cuddle.
TO EVERY GIRL WHO SHOWS HOW MUCH SHE CARES BUT GETS NOTHING BACK.
To every girl that ever thought "Maybe this one could be the one."
To every girl that laughs at stupid stuff when she actually doesn't think it is funny.
To every girl who is just looking for that one and only and is having a rough time along the way.
To every girl that doesn't want a guy who just plays with her emotions but actually cares about how she feels.
TO EVERY GIRL WHO WANTS WORDS BACKED UP WITH ACTIONS.
TO EVERY girl that FELL for ALL the LIES ONLY TO FIND THEMSELVES ALONE in the END.
To every girl that gave her heart away to have it shoved back in her face.
To every girl that has faith that "tomorrow will be a better day." And it will be.

-If you are a nice girl repost this as: "To every girl."
-If you are a guy that truly thinks every girl should try to think about even a few of these things repost it as "I am looking for this girl" or if u have this girl repost this as “I have this girl"

Songs i LOVEEE (okay okay, you might think some of them are lame, but i think they have wonderful lyrics ):

-Concrete Angel remixed by DJ Boonie
-When We Die by Bowling For Soup
-Is It You by Cassie
-What Hurts The Most by Rascal Flatts
-Never Let You Go by Janice Wei
-Beautiful Soul by Jesse McCartney
-Because You Live by Jesse McCartney
-Bleeding Love by Leona Lewis
-Moment Like This by Leona Lewis
-Leave Out All The Rest by Linkin Park
-Moving On
-Fall For You by Secondhand Serenade
-Its Not Over by Secondhand Serenade

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  • Immortal Obscurity on October 7
    Helloooooo, little sister Just dropping by your page to spread some love ♥

    Take care,

  • bosiarbooger : Hello my young friend on September 12
    I stopped by to say thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. I read you poem I'm sorry, don't ever be sorry for who you are for we are all one of a kind. No two alike well almost, Have a wonderful day and keep writing. Best of luck to you, Boog
  • Eternal Pain on August 23
    Got this from another person's profile. Loved it cos found it quite true...the sad truth that some guys just can't accept girls the way the are...
  • Surprise Poet : I'm Sorry on August 23
    Nothing to be sorry about...ILYJTWYA...a very astute & sad observation over all of us...

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