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EmptyWishShow poetry

I made an account on this site because I've written poetry for only a year now and i wanted to know if anyone thought I had talent or if my poems were good. Im not known at all for writing poetry so I couldnt really go around asking everyone. I havent had anything taught to me or anybody to tell me how to write. I just like how words rhymed together and thought that I would give it a shot.

So thanks to my friend Jade she showed me this site and I was drawn to it imediatly. Enjoy a few of my poems and feel free to comment.

Im 16 years old and i Live in Tumwater, washingotn. Message if you want to know more, i dont like talkin to much about myself.

  • Last seen on Dec 20 8:36 PM 2007. Member since January 27, 2006.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 135 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Did I choose this life or did it choose me?".
  • I am a 16 year old guy (United States)
  • I have 135 comments, 19 poems

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 19   Show all Search
  • But I guess I'm one that's chosen to suffer
    Its not like I asked for this or somethin
    39 lines, April 2, 2006. In Other, Humor
  • Things were so bad that when you left
    My life hit 60 and never looked back
    39 lines, 3 comments, February 18, 2006. In Other, Hope
  • Hope it stays and lasts the years
    For mans reach grows ever near
    18 lines, 2 comments, February 13, 2006. In Nature
  • I toast to the sea
    May fair weather she bring
    19 lines, 6 comments, February 12, 2006. In Other, Nature

Guest Book

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  • The Midnight Sun on February 12, 2006
    Hey i see so far no one has droped by to welcome you so here i am saying hello to you hope you like it here and i hope you like my poetry ill keep an eye on your writtings.

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