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ElusiveStarShow poetry

(Updated March 29, 2008)

The Basics:



Hi, My name is Nikki.

I am a Navy wife.

I am a Mother.

My husband and I got married on August 22nd of 2006.

But things aren't working out and I'm moving on and finally beginning to discover who I am.

We have a gorgeous daughter together and her name is

Calli.

I adore her.

She was born January 20th of 2007.
She's 1 year, 2 months, 1 week, and 2 days old today.

I live on Whidbey Island and have some really awesome friends.

They mean the world to me

My Poetry:


I don't see my poetry as that great compared to all the poems I have seen.

But I've been told that my poems are good.

I'll let you all be the judge of that.

Any opinions or advice that you could give to improve my writing will be appreciated.

Don't be afraid to criticize my poems because that's what I want.

I want to know what I'm doing wrong or what I can do to make it better.

I know I don't have that much talent but it's something I like to do and read.

I wish I could be great at it but it's just something to pass the time and organize my feelings in something other than spontaneous outbursts.


Thanks for visiting my page

God Bless

~Nikki~

My Poetry

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  • There are keys in the door now and the doorknob turns.
    Silence.
    23 lines, 10 comments, June 2, 2007. In Love, Life, Joy
  • After all the years of being turned to nothing but mere dust underneath a useless purpose / We stumbled upon eachother. / You took your words and planted them in my head. / Words like beautiful, worthy, and love.
    30 lines, 1 comment, June 1, 2007. In Love, Personal, Dark, Pain
  • But you were always there
    Waiting...
    66 lines, September 27, 2006. In Personal, Love, Hope
  • He doesn’t know about the thoughts
    So many each day, dedicated to him
    21 lines, September 27, 2006. In Personal, Love, Hope

My Stories

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  • Two hearts that shouldn't be together found their ways to each other. Man and women. Not allowed to be together, yet irresistible to each other. A forbidden love. She was a que
    574 lines, October 27, 2005. In <200 lines

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