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Elizabethenvy891

Hellloo. im liz

Im new here, but i wanted a place to summit my poetry for others to give me their opinions. And i found this site. lol so just tell me what you think, what you like or dont like, what you think needs work and such. I really appriciate it.

muchlove

  • Last seen on Nov 3 8:45 AM. Member since July 16.
  • I am a 16 year old girl from Ohio (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm thinking about writing.
  • I have 11 poems

My Poetry

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  • The novel that is our love
    All the light has come pouring out of my heart into the beautiful world, thanks to you
    19 lines, November 3. In love, life
  • The Killer
    This feeling balled up inside me; curled up, coiled tightly like a deadly viper ready to strike.
    Pouncing upon my victem i will show no mercry, till the last man stands.
    27 lines, October 22. In Thoughts, other, society
  • Doubt
    Can i believe you're there for me?
    Will I put my faith in you, To be faithful to me?
    13 lines, October 22. In doubt, Pain, Personal, Relationships, Faith
  • The Pit
    When we have fallen so deep into the pit
    is it ever possible to make it out?
    14 lines, 3 comments, July 17. In society, thoughts, dark, life

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