ElectricStarrySkies• Show poetry

Hey, I really want to get into poetry for real so please comment whether positive or negative. No insults please but constructive criticism welcome!

I like to think my influences include Simon Armitage, G.M Hopkins and Brian Pattern- all legends!!!!

Had to put this in: written for me by Jonathan ROBIN Check out his stuff guys-its amazing

E lectric eyes dwarf starry skies as NASA, Hubble, may attest,
L ight time defies constant surprise provides with energy and zest,
E nchantment here can't dissappear, links light to laughter hope possessed,
C harm harm disarms, fear fades, alarms change tune to cue to beauty's guest.
T hus verse denies all others, prize unique speaks peak North South East West
R evere as wise, all realize that real eyes shame others' best
I n brilliance, size, exquisite guise, say guys worldwide, from treasure chest
C hoice sparkles rise while one replies with welcome to successful quest

Last seen 1 day ago. Member since November 19, 2007.
I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 66 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "Live Life:Love Life".
I am a girl (Great Britain)
I have 66 comments, 15 poems

My Poetry

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Jane Eyre

'Plain Jane', that's what they called her
who knew what was beneath the skin?

35 lines, 3 comments, October 27
Searching For Him

Will I find him? Will he find me?
Is there really someone for everyone?

8 lines, 1 comment, October 27
You Picked Me Up

Lord, in my darkest moment
You were there

6 lines, 1 comment, October 27. In Spiritual, Hope, Life
[ Take away my words ]

Take away my words
leave me in silence

18 lines, 3 comments, October 10