ElectricStarrySkies• Show poetry

Hey, I really want to get into poetry for real so please comment whether positive or negative. No insults please but constructive criticism welcome!

I like to think my influences include Simon Armitage, G.M Hopkins and Brian Pattern- all legends!!!!

Had to put this in: written for me by Jonathan ROBIN Check out his stuff guys-its amazing

E lectric eyes dwarf starry skies as NASA, Hubble, may attest,
L ight time defies constant surprise provides with energy and zest,
E nchantment here can't dissappear, links light to laughter hope possessed,
C harm harm disarms, fear fades, alarms change tune to cue to beauty's guest.
T hus verse denies all others, prize unique speaks peak North South East West
R evere as wise, all realize that real eyes shame others' best
I n brilliance, size, exquisite guise, say guys worldwide, from treasure chest
C hoice sparkles rise while one replies with welcome to successful quest


Favourite Songs:

Moon River-Andy Williams
Kentucky Rain-Elvis Presley
Emotion-Destiny's Child
What's Love Got To Do With It?- Tina Turner
Stronger-Britney Spears
Can't Hold Us Down- Christina Aguilera
Dirty Diana-Michael Jackson
Ocean Deep- Cliff Richard
Oopsy Daisy-Chipmunk
Please Don't Fall In Love-Cliff Richard
Champagne Supernova- Oasis

......And the list continues.....

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My favourite authors are:

The Bronte Sisters
Stephanie Meyer

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Favourite Films???? :
Don't really watch films but my favs are......

Ghost, Dirty Dancing, Angel Eyes, Dorian Gray, Shakespeare In Love, Pride & Prejudice (BBC Version).