(For perspective: I'm a "damned" liberal, bi, Pagan (that means of an Earth-worshiping religion as far as I can tell, into which I inject my beliefs about the duality of deity), or as my friends put it, I'm a "Lesbian Fairy" and a "Gothic Hippy"... I'm just generally Demented.)
I'm trying to be my own favorite poet, and I'm finally starting to make progress at that! At the same time, I'm recently writing poetry just to get my emotions out there and to try new styles. I want to publish a book someday, either a novel or a collection of my poetry, but I don't want to make it my career because I don't deal with pressure and lack of structure very well.
I used to be so very picky about punctuation and everything, but I've decided that's not what makes a poem great: deliberation makes a poem great! Poems sounds good when they sound like you *mean* it... but I still think that if in doubt, use proper grammar...
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Cats rule.
I'm trying to be my own favorite poet, and I'm finally starting to make progress at that! At the same time, I'm recently writing poetry just to get my emotions out there and to try new styles. I want to publish a book someday, either a novel or a collection of my poetry, but I don't want to make it my career because I don't deal with pressure and lack of structure very well.
I used to be so very picky about punctuation and everything, but I've decided that's not what makes a poem great: deliberation makes a poem great! Poems sounds good when they sound like you *mean* it... but I still think that if in doubt, use proper grammar...
Packmates on AllPoetry!
Aiden: allpoetry.com/poets/yumesandman
Kyra: allpoetry.com/poets/recky
Mariana: allpoetry.com/poets/infinite%20spirit
Mehi: allpoetry.com/poets/hisandhers
Morgan: allpoetry.com/poets/black%20rose%20spirit
Cats rule.
- Last seen on Jul 9 12:34 AM 2007. Member since December 31, 2004.
- I'm a moonstone path poet for 469 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Live Deliberatly!".
- I am a 18 year old woman (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/elainadarkwind
- I have 469 comments, 3 contests, 1 column, 61 poems, 3 stories
Poems I'm focused on
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The key turns and the motor purrs to life,
I smile at you and pull out, My world is waiting. -
A world of ash, brick, rusting steel is revolutionized by carbon-based pollution and silicon communication
My Poetry
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I stare into eyes (they claim to be my own)
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Because I’m tired of blocking the doors that are my escape
for the thousandth and first time.
My Stories
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Chirping birds greeted a Saturday morning, the kind that no one could hate. The frost from the night before had left the newly green gras
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Once upon a time, there was a dainty little kingdom among many other dainty little kingdoms. Like all kingdoms, it had a king, and this king had only one child, a daughter, an
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Burningpeat on June 8, 2006I am very glad you, like me, feel that true art is deliberate. Even spontaneous, emotional art benefits from deliberation.
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Thank you so much for commenting on my poem
You comment was amazing, really beautiful, probably better than the poem itself!! "Oh, the terrible things living souls go through, and feel more dead then the dead, for the dead can't feel that they're dead." - You've got it spot on, you described that wonderfully
~ Laura xx -
infinite spirit on January 6, 2005ok first of all, i've read many of thse before and they drive me crazy cause thy're all so good....why must you beat me at everything? lol. anyway about the comments you made on my poetry, i format them the way i do with the short lines because it gioves the the same rythm as my thoughts. one at a time but all strung together. you know how my mind works. anyway, i love you but i hate you for this, you realize that riht? i'll never fogive you! aw who am i kidding i'l forgive you cause thats just how am, i forgive everybody...anyway get back here! now!
