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A journey of a thousand miles,
begins with a single step


             -Chinese proverb

Laughter is timeless...
imagination has no age..
and dreams are forever
              -Disney
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Hi, my name is Brooke, and i am a Christian, some of my poems are about that and how i feel about God and my faith and stuff, i know many ppl don't believe in the same things as me and that's ok, but don't put down my beliefs, and i'll try to have the same curtesy for you.
Anyways here i go my life is kinda boring.
I live in a small town, with my family. I have two brothers. We are homeschooled by our mother, I love to draw and paint, read and write.
My best friends interduced me to this site and I want to thank them for that.
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I don't think that my poetry is that great but I enjoy doing it. Please be honest about my work and give advice that I can maybe use to improve my writing.if you feel like commenting on my work i will try and reply or comment on one of your poems.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I have been blessed with some really great friends and here are a few of them that belong to this site.            
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ amber,she is my best friend in the entire world, like the sister i never had. we've had alot of good times and there are many more ahead.though i could've killed you for the FROG!lol.and i still don't know what i was thinkin when i asked 'where's the other one' now you have some blonde moments on me.don't forget fairy ear's, hoover dam, grand canyon.that trip was the best!!!can't wait to do it again, i had the best time ever, i think we all did.lylas
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screamer, you are a truly wonderful friend and person.i can't believe how much fun we have when we're all together it's a blast.skating was so fun!we'll have to go again.
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godsangel88, you have been such a help to me with everything, don't know what i would do without you there to talk to me and give me good advice with everything.you have been GREAT!!!!!
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I also want to thank all the ppl on here for reading my work it's not the best, but it comes from the heart.God bless.
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There are so many great poets on this site here are some of my fav's
(in no real order)

blink4gc(bestest friend and great poet)
Jchc(friend i met here and great poet)
untoldsecrets( bestest friend and great poet)
screamer(best friend and great poet)
JedahDyah(great poet)
mickey69(cuz, friend and great poet)
Falsehopes(great poet)
JeSuSchick(great poet)
godsangel88(great poet and friend)
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I won my first contest so i am like soooo happy!!!!i want to thank AlexMetal for that.I still can't believe it!i love AP!


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  • Last seen on Nov 24 8:13 PM 2008. Member since February 26, 2004.
  • I'm a opaline dream poet for 865 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Cry a river, build a bridge, and get over it".
  • I am a 15 year old girl (USA)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student(duh).
  • Visit my homepage at don
  • I have 865 comments, 1 addline, 39 poems

My Poetry

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  • Sometimes I wonder if I'll ever find someone
    Who will love me with all his heart
    24 lines, 3 comments, September 21, 2005. In Love, Angst
  • There are times when I'm sure You get annoyed
    Tired of hearing me complain
    25 lines, 4 comments, April 2, 2005. In Spiritual
  • To the ones I left behind,
    Do not fear my stead.
    17 lines, 7 comments, September 13, 2004. In Sad, Personal, Love
  • So graceful and so beautiful
    She does her work in twilight hours
    15 lines, 8 comments, August 21, 2004. In Fantasy, Weird, Other

Guest Book

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  • gothJCHC on August 6, 2005
    Hi. I have not seen you on here in a while. I hope that life is going well for you, that you are being blessed emensely. I tell you what, I have been through many seasons with my walk with God and it is all worth it. College is wonderful, though I have gotten used to it.
  • gothJCHC on January 10, 2005
    Hey. Long time, no speak! I wanted to stop by and say hello and to see how you are doing. I am doing well. I have been through a lot, but I am coming out the other side and I am okay. Hope to hear from you soon.
    Unashamed,
    Teresa
  • sogoodinblue on December 28, 2004
    hey, haven't been on here for a while. i thought i'd drop ya a line, even though i'll talk to ya soon. lol. ttyl lylas. byez!!!
    <3/ ur lil elf friend!
  • gothJCHC on November 21, 2004
    I just wanted to say hello. I haven't been on in a while. I hope that your day has beeb a blessed one and I hope that everything is going well for you.

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