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I'm just a guy, coping and getting by. Nothing particularly strange or special here. I used to write a lot, but now I struggle to find the time.

Most of what I write is fairly grim, I don't apologise for this really, if its not what you want to read, then please don't! However, comments are always very gratefully received, especially if they have hints or tips for how I can improve my technique, or even a particular poem.

My inspiration can come from anywhere, and not all of my stuff gets put up on here. Some of it is, on the other hand, written as I go solely on here. Most of the poems on here, however, seem to be based on relationships, past or present. They often are the sorts of things that I find really get the most potent human emotions going. Relationships are so strong that even seeing pain inflicted on a stranger can often stir the heart of an onlooker, and even if I can't convey this succintly.

Feel free to drop me a message, and as I say, all comments are appreciated. I'll try and return the favour.

Thanks for your time!

  • Last seen on Aug 26 1:51 PM. Member since January 14, 2005.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 72 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Pain is simply weakness leaving the body.".
  • I am a 18 year old guy (England)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
  • I have 72 comments, 27 poems, 1 philosophy

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  • Shadow666 on September 11, 2005
    hello me an emily are great friends n we love each othewr to pieces, i thought the amethyst was funny... anywho, metal detectors went off! ahhhhh i feel a strip search coming on..... PDA!!!!!
  • painhelpsusfeel on September 7, 2005
    it was an insult from me... god knows what from allpoetry lol!!!! understanding? pfft!.... lol im only joking!!!
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  • Dopamine on September 7, 2005
    I mean, come on!!!
  • Dopamine on September 7, 2005
    is it an insult, or acompliment?!

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