"She's crazy! She's so hopelessly insane and full of herself too! Who does she think she is? Parading herself about in such a manner, as if she doesn't care what anyone thinks about her. She must care if they gossip, I know she does."
"But miss, she doesn't."
"Nonsense. Of course she cares. Everyone does. She's just an actress. Underneath it all, she's just like everyone else!"
"But- Miss. She isn't."
"She acts as is she's got a heart the size of Mars!"
"Yes, ma'am. She does. It's true. But it isn't acting."
"She's so silly sometimes! It's like she's comfortable in her own skin."
"I guess. That seems about right, Miss."
"She can be so innocent, when she wants to be."
"Key words being...what exactly?"
"When she wants to be."
"Of course, ma'am."
"She's so passionate about everything to the point where it gets to be completely annoying. There's no way, even in a frozen hell, that one person could be in love with so many things; dancing, singing, reading, story writing, poetry, music. No one could be filled with such passion and still have room to love the people she's around."
"But Miss. She does have the room. She's fallen helplessly in love with everyone around here. Her family, her friends. She loves them."
[Okay. So, I got bored and wrote this about a woman and her servant. The dominant woman (who speaks the most) is describing me, in a way. While the servant is throwing out corrections of her master's misconceptions.]
"But miss, she doesn't."
"Nonsense. Of course she cares. Everyone does. She's just an actress. Underneath it all, she's just like everyone else!"
"But- Miss. She isn't."
"She acts as is she's got a heart the size of Mars!"
"Yes, ma'am. She does. It's true. But it isn't acting."
"She's so silly sometimes! It's like she's comfortable in her own skin."
"I guess. That seems about right, Miss."
"She can be so innocent, when she wants to be."
"Key words being...what exactly?"
"When she wants to be."
"Of course, ma'am."
"She's so passionate about everything to the point where it gets to be completely annoying. There's no way, even in a frozen hell, that one person could be in love with so many things; dancing, singing, reading, story writing, poetry, music. No one could be filled with such passion and still have room to love the people she's around."
"But Miss. She does have the room. She's fallen helplessly in love with everyone around here. Her family, her friends. She loves them."
[Okay. So, I got bored and wrote this about a woman and her servant. The dominant woman (who speaks the most) is describing me, in a way. While the servant is throwing out corrections of her master's misconceptions.]
- Last seen on Sep 3 12:48 AM. Member since September 3, 2006.
- I'm a carnelian hope poet for 105 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "My mind is nothing but a clump of interesting vocabulary waiting to be deciphered.".
- I have 105 comments, 1 contest, 11 poems, 3 stories
Poems I'm focused on
My Poetry
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And so like a book, your story ends here.22 lines, 5 comments, September 8, 2008. In Dark, Personal, Pain, Depression, Suicide, Depressed, Escape, Teen issues
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16 lines, July 18, 2008
My Stories
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Her rosewood colored lips were pressed into a hard, thin line. She shook her head, tiny midnight curls fell loose from a messy bun perched318 lines, 7 comments, April 7. In <600 words, Lesbian, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Romance, Short story, Unfinished
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235 lines, 6 comments, July 15, 2008. In <600 words, Dance, First person, Love, Romance, Spiritual, Unfinished, Young adult
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An upper class teenage girl tries to over-come a monsterous disorder that threatens to ruin her whole life.3176 lines, 6 comments, January 7, 2008. In 2000-5000 words, Death, Drama, Pain, Personal, Sad, Short story, Spiritual, Tragedy
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karma-n-peace on November 4, 2007Heya Doll Faise, LOL sorry had to say it, was it Carrie Grant that coined that? hhhmmmm who cares right! LOL
Anyway~ Sorry it took me so long to make it to your guest book, been through a bit too much lately.
Your work is so beautifully sad and written so well.
You say want to be a writer, well my dear then I believe you will be!
I know you don't write in bulk but what you do write is worth the wait.
Thanx for sharing your beautiful creations here with us!
Blessings sent your way~
Sincerely, Nicole
