Develon

• Last seen on Oct 28 7:51 PM. Member since November 25, 2002.
• I'm a obsidian idea poet for 602 comments.
• My mood is , and quote is "optomistic".
• I am a 28 year old guy from North Carolina (United States)
• When I'm not writing, I'm a photographer, videographer, and conversationalist.
• I have 602 comments, 160 poems

My Poetry

• Tally

  I am perishable
  and well aware of my expiration date

  15 lines, October 28
• Hush

  27 lines, 1 comment, February 6, 2008. In Erotica, Adult
• Puzzled

  Ideally, we were puzzle pieces destined for assembly
  our lives gently scattered on the dinning room table

  68 lines, 1 comment, February 23, 2007. In Hope
• Sober Sex

  Chorus:
  Let’s…have

  110 lines, 2 comments, January 27, 2007

Guest Book

• Develon on April 14, 2005

  First off, I don't recall ever calling you childish. I've gone back and even reviewed my own comments that I made to you. I also never said I didn't like your poetry. I wrote a comment on ONE poem. Your 1 out of 112 sample of my work doesn't justify you saying you don't like mine either. I'm simply pointing out to you that your responses, as heartfelt as they may have been, were born of revenge and not honest criticism. As far as i'm concerned, I don't want you to stay away from my poetry, I would rather you take a larger look at it as you may find something you like, considering I am NOT a one deminsional artist. If you're not willing to do that, you're in no position to tell me to "open up and be thoughtful."
  Edited on Apr 14, 4:48 p.m. because ''.
• BeautyInMyTragedy on April 14, 2005

  fine if youre not 30 then you need to stop acting like you are because you need to live and open up and be thoughtfull and not crude- calling me childish or a child throwing a tantrum was wrong but whatever now i honestly dont care because i think your peotry is bad and you think mine is bad so lets just do this stay away from my poetry and i'll leave you alone that way mr. uptight doesnt have to deal with my being childish! deal?
• GoldenEssence on March 20, 2005

  I think its awesome that you have such a good look on life. Believe me, 4 months ago I was just like that. But right now I feel as if mo God has left me. I know this isnt true, but I am ssssooo depressed, I have to express myself or I will end uup doing something horrible to myself. Tahnks for the comment.
  
  GRace
• King Bongmaster on December 3, 2004

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