Hey!!
Right, I'm a nineteen year old gay guy and for some reason a while ago I wrote a couple of poems. The idea of being a poet, is for now a "pie in the sky" one, but maybe I'll eventually take it more seriously.
I'd love it if as many people as possible would read any poem I've written and just tell me what they think.
I'm not afraid of criticism! Hell, blow the poems apart if you think you can, It'll help me to do better the nest time!
Right, I'm a nineteen year old gay guy and for some reason a while ago I wrote a couple of poems. The idea of being a poet, is for now a "pie in the sky" one, but maybe I'll eventually take it more seriously.
I'd love it if as many people as possible would read any poem I've written and just tell me what they think.
I'm not afraid of criticism! Hell, blow the poems apart if you think you can, It'll help me to do better the nest time!
- Last seen on Sep 20 3:29 PM. Member since May 24, 2007.
- My mood is , and quote is "What must be shall be, and never fear the inevitable!".
- I am a 19 year old man
My Poetry
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Funny, / the way I move you, / make you (mine) / and control you. / I am honest, not biased and yet / some place there does lurk some demon. / Is it (in) my silvery / theoretically infinite depths? / Or doe
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