I write what I feel, and about what I've gone through or am going through at the moment. It doesn't matter WHAT I'm doing at the moment, if something pops into my head I stop and have to write it down! I have two beautiful girls that I love very much! Although they are begining the teenage years and I don't know if I'll live through them! I had a sucky childhood and I recently got out of an abusive relationship. So most of my writing is about one or the other. I don't mind people critiquing my work, but, try to be kind. I don't want that you think it sucks, I would like to know what you think is wrong with it and how you think I could fix it. I can't garrentee that I'll follow your advice, but, I will consider it. If you comment on anything of mine know that I will comment on yours. It may not be your most recent one though. I like to read older pieces sometimes!
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Ahhhhhh! The infamous BUNNY!!!! Someday Bunnies will RULE THE WORLD!!!!
*A girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road...
Girl: Slow down. I’m scared.
Guy: No, this is fun.
Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary!
Guy: Then tell me you love me.
Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down!
Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
*Girl hugs him*
Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me.
(In the paper the next day)
A motorcycle crashed into a building because of break failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived.
The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his breaks broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die.
If you would ever do this for someone....then post this on your page A.S.A.P!!!
Got another one for ya...
-PLEASE READ THIS-
we need to stop child abuse
My name is Sarah I am but three,
My eyes are swollen I cannot see,
I must be stupid I must be bad,
What else could have made My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up All the day long
When I awake I'm all alone
The house is dark My folks aren't home.
When my mommy does come I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just One whipping tonight
Don't make a sound! I just heard a car
My daddy is back From Charlie's Bar.
I hear him curse My name he calls
I press myself Against the wall.
I try and hide From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now I'm starting to cry.
He finds me weeping He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault That he suffers at work.
He slaps me and hits me And yells at me more,
I finally get free And I run for the door.
He's already locked it And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues With more bad words spoken.
"I'm sorry!", I scream But its now much too late
His face has been twisted Into unimaginable hate.
The hurt and the pain Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy! Oh please let it end!
And he finally stops And heads for the door,
While I lay there motionless Sprawled on the floor.
My name is Sarah And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy Murdered me.
Update: I recently published a short book of some of my poetry called "Real Poetry about Real Emotions". It can be downloaded or ordered at lulu.com. I know that this is not the most prestigous place to publish, but, it's a start, right?!
Someone important to me once said that he likes to read my poems because it's how he knows what I'm feeling at the time!!!!
So far I have a few AP family members
A sister: Wings of an angel
A brother: endeavor4u (Rick)
Nieces: known2balone223 (Danica),Mis Rangerette1993
A nephew: poetboy2008
I am always looking for more family so IM me if you are interested!
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Ahhhhhh! The infamous BUNNY!!!! Someday Bunnies will RULE THE WORLD!!!!
*A girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road...
Girl: Slow down. I’m scared.
Guy: No, this is fun.
Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary!
Guy: Then tell me you love me.
Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down!
Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
*Girl hugs him*
Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me.
(In the paper the next day)
A motorcycle crashed into a building because of break failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived.
The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his breaks broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die.
If you would ever do this for someone....then post this on your page A.S.A.P!!!
Got another one for ya...
-PLEASE READ THIS-
we need to stop child abuse
My name is Sarah I am but three,
My eyes are swollen I cannot see,
I must be stupid I must be bad,
What else could have made My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up All the day long
When I awake I'm all alone
The house is dark My folks aren't home.
When my mommy does come I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just One whipping tonight
Don't make a sound! I just heard a car
My daddy is back From Charlie's Bar.
I hear him curse My name he calls
I press myself Against the wall.
I try and hide From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now I'm starting to cry.
He finds me weeping He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault That he suffers at work.
He slaps me and hits me And yells at me more,
I finally get free And I run for the door.
He's already locked it And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues With more bad words spoken.
"I'm sorry!", I scream But its now much too late
His face has been twisted Into unimaginable hate.
The hurt and the pain Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy! Oh please let it end!
And he finally stops And heads for the door,
While I lay there motionless Sprawled on the floor.
My name is Sarah And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy Murdered me.
Update: I recently published a short book of some of my poetry called "Real Poetry about Real Emotions". It can be downloaded or ordered at lulu.com. I know that this is not the most prestigous place to publish, but, it's a start, right?!
Someone important to me once said that he likes to read my poems because it's how he knows what I'm feeling at the time!!!!
So far I have a few AP family members
A sister: Wings of an angel
A brother: endeavor4u (Rick)
Nieces: known2balone223 (Danica),Mis Rangerette1993
A nephew: poetboy2008
I am always looking for more family so IM me if you are interested!
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- When I'm not writing, I'm working in nursing, preferrably geriatrics. (elderly).
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Do you have any feelings / Why don't you understand / The pain you're inflicting on me / Is worse than the striking of your hand / Every ti
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This is NOT about a person! It is about an addiction. Those that have been there or are there will
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You're no longer here beside me
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Ted E Bare on May 22Happy Memorial Day weekend and please be safe out there (I'm driving to my brothers and I don't want you to hit me...seriously, please be careful so I can see you here at a later time)
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Stuart Higginson on December 16, 2008P.S. Ignore spelling mistakes in my long message, lol! "Literatti" ... is the correct spelling, I believe! My touch-pad is playing havoc with my touch-typing, and I accidentally posted my message while trying to proof-read it, lol.
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Stuart Higginson on December 16, 2008Hi DML
There's nothing wrong with self-publishing on Lulu.com ... the fact that you made the efforts to publish and share your work with the world is commendable in its own right. I dislike the snobbery that dictates poetry is only valid if accepted and published by "proper publishers" (though if it is published by them, then ... wonderful!). I tire of the "fashionistas" and "literrati" who like to dictate what is - and what isn't - "poetry".
I have read poetry that is written by the unpublished, even those who would likely be rejected by the "powers that be", but whose words and works have resonated with me far more than some of that which I have seen published. I have discovered poetry on AP that holds my respect more than some of that which was featured in the 2007 poetry reviews here in the UK ... so please do not self-depreciate, merely be proud that your work is "out there" I have toyed with the idea of producing a little something for Lulu.com myself, though at the moment am so tied-up with my drama work that it is something of an "in-the-pipeline" venture!
Self-publishing does allow you the creative control you might not find if your work was taken-on by a (non-self-)publishing company, and for me that concept does hold much appeal.
Best wishes, and Xmas greetings,
Stuart.
