"have you heard of the Heaven's War?"
"no, i haven't. it must have been a long time ago...when was it?"
"...three months ago" smile
"what!?! that's impossible! where?"
"on the very ground your standing... over there is where you hid, and there's where you ran when you were found... and outside there is where you were caught and...killed"
"your lying! you don't know what your talking about, how can i be dead? how could there have been a war that nobody knows about? it's impossible..."
"...or is it"
"no, i haven't. it must have been a long time ago...when was it?"
"...three months ago" smile
"what!?! that's impossible! where?"
"on the very ground your standing... over there is where you hid, and there's where you ran when you were found... and outside there is where you were caught and...killed
"your lying! you don't know what your talking about, how can i be dead? how could there have been a war that nobody knows about? it's impossible..
"...or is it"
- Last seen on Mar 21 12:21 AM 2007. Member since October 17, 2003.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 70 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is ""to strange to live, to rare to die"".
- I am a girl (USA)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- I have 70 comments
My Poetry
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you cried in dispair
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i want to make a slit into my chest...
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Betrayed to tears that turn to blood which soak her hands
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dp robertson on December 30, 2003Hi
All the best for 2004 and thank you for your comments and support. Have fun next year and I look forward to reading your writings
David -
PoetrySmiles on December 17, 2003Ooh, you're from WA? *Dances around* I grew up in WA
Anyway hee hee I've only read...one? of your works, but I really liked it methinks I am going to go read more now...
Just wanted to say thanks for reading and commenting on my junk, I appreciate it greatly!
Cheerios!!
Meg
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TheColorofBlood on December 2, 2003u really rock! thanx for commentingon "Memories Shattered" not alot of people like it because it is a proclamation of my faith. O well, i like it and thats really all that matters.. and i gues su like it too. Keep writing, you rock
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fallen-angels on October 24, 2003You liar. You don't suck. Not in the slightest. And thanks for letting me know you had some up. I think i will add you to my favorites. Keep it up.
