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ELLO PEOPLE! Oka, I'm 16 years old, and a Junior at West Anchorage High School In the great AK. It's awsome. I plan on joining the poetry club, but don't really have time for it.. I'm In the AFJROTC for my third year. I'm also in Orchestra and play the Cello, It's mi life. I've been writing poetry for six to seven years. I do it for friends who need some words to comfort them. But other than that.. its how i feel at the moment.. oka.. before i bore you to much b4 u read my wrk.. I hope you enjoy in and I'd appreciate a comment every here and there, to let me know how i'm doing.. and if i need to improve on anything specific.. well thanx! TTYL!

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"Better Than Me"

I think you can do much better than me
After all the lies that I made you believe
Guilt kicks in and I start to see
The edge of the bed
Where your nightgown used to be
I told myself I won't miss you
But I remember
What it feels like beside you
I really miss your hair in my face
And the way your innocence tastes
And I think you should know this
You deserve much better than me

While looking through your old box of notes
I found those pictures I took
That you were looking for
If there's one memory I don't want to lose
That time at the mall
You and me in the dressing room
I told myself I won't miss you
But I remember
What it feels like beside you
I really miss your hair in my face
And the way your innocence tastes
And I think you should know this
You deserve much better than me

The bed I'm lying in is getting colder
Wish I never would've said it's over
And I can't pretend... I won't think about you when I'm older
Cause we never really had our closure
This can't be the end
I really miss your hair in my face
And the way your innocence tastes
And I think you should know this
You deserve much better than me
I really miss your hair in my face
And the way your innocence tastes
And I think you should know this
You deserve much better than me
(And I think you should know this)
(You deserve much better than me)


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"Say OK"

You are fine
You are sweet
But I'm still a bit naive with my heart
When you're close I don't breathe
I can't find the words to speak
I feel sparks
But I don't want to be into you
If you not lookin for true love
No I don't wanna start seein' you
If I can't be your only one

[Chorus]
So tell me when it's not alright
When it's not OK
Will you try to make me feel better?
Will you say alright? (say alright)
Will you say OK? (Say OK)
Will you stick with me through whatever?
Or run away
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK)
Say OK.

When you call I don't know if I should pick up the phone every time
I'm not like all my friends who keep calling up the boys, I'm so shy
But I don't want to be into you
If you don't treat me the right way
See I can only start seeing you
If you can make my heart feel safe (feel safe)

[Chorus]
When it's not alright
When it's not OK
Will you try to make me feel better?
Will you say alright? (say alright)
Will you say OK? (Say OK)
Will you stick with me through whatever?
Or run away
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK
Don't run away, don't run away)

Let me know if it's gonna be you
Boy, you've got some things to prove
Let me know that you'll keep me safe
I don't want you to run away so
Let me know that you'll call on time
Let me know that you'll help me shine
Will you wipe my tears away
Will you hold me close and say

[Chorus]
When it's not alright
When it's not OK
Will you try to make me feel better
Will you say alright? (say alright)
Will you say OK? (Say OK)
Will you stick with me through whatever?
Or run away
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK)
Say OK
(Don't run away, don't run away)
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK, don't run away)
Will you say OK
(Say that it's gonna be alright. That it's gonna be OK)

My Poetry

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    7 lines, 1 comment, July 30. In Other
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    17 lines, 1 comment, June 4. In Weird, Sad, Love, Other
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    I am the one who is afraid to show my true self.
    10 lines, 4 comments, April 2
  • I'm lost and alone.. in this cruel world
    15 lines, 1 comment, April 2. In Dark, Sad, Personal

Visitor Book

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  • Hiddenspaces on June 8, 2007
    'Ello.........
    ...........Sie's daughter.lol.
    just wannted to say....'Allo.lol.
    have a good day.
  • TheDemiprist on May 20, 2007
    lolz you look so great, i think your in your early 20's
    gratz with the puppies .
    -Matt
  • MiseriaCantare13 on May 1, 2007
    I have made you into my AP sister. LOL
  • Reiga on April 6, 2007
    Hey there! I decided to drop you a comment as thanks for dropping me one! Thanks much

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