Hey, Im 19 from Springfield, MA. im a rapper/MC/poet and i just want some feedback from a variety of people so feel free to critique. I tend to focus on rhyme scheme a lot but i never force anything, and everything makes sense so if u dont think something does then you probably missed what i said in the line b4 and so on. Many of my poems are in a rap style, well...i can rap all of them...so yeah lol but neway if ur on my page you should definitely check some out and leave a comment, peace
- Last seen on Jul 28 3:45 AM 2008. Member since January 19, 2008.
- I'm a emerald dog poet for 5 comments.
- I am a 19 year old guy from Massachusetts (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm rapping, playing basketball, working out, in school and a lot of other stuff lol.
- Visit my homepage at myspace.com/stillcrazylegs
- I am in the groups Rappers Freestyles Battles and Lyricis
- I have 5 comments, 4 poems
My Poetry
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for the Ego contest, peep the mean 7-syllable rhyme scheme, tough right?
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this is a verse for i wrote, dont know what beat to use but its to show how poetic good rappers are, hope u like it
