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ok, I'm a 17 year old from somewhere in TN... I love poetry... I write like all the time... I write about love, death, fear, pain, etc... just about everything... I'm not emo or suicidal... even tho alot of my poems are suicidal... that's just me in a depressed state... my favorite bands are Atreyu, Avenged Sevenfold, The Used, Motley crue, AC/DC (yeah, keeping it old school! lol) and more.... u should visit my purevolume site... www.purevolume.com/backend/listeners/crimsonraindrop that's me!

Hey everyone! Just letting you know I am creating a new Mypsace... as soon as I can get the damn fucker to work... but yeah, anywho... haha. my current myspace somehow got a bug on it... and yeah, it's making everyone lose things... so yeah... Look for meh..



As some of you might know, I just lost my grandpa... please, if you pray, pray for my family that we will be strong... especially me and my grandma... thank you. I'm already missing him!


http://allpoetry.com/poem/1956293# it's by my friend ShadowEyesHatebreed... omg, it's great... or at least, I love it... you should read it! please do, she will love it! I'm the only one who has even commented....... please, comment on her poem... please...

Here's one song that has helped me get through a lot of things! it's called "Hold On" it's by Good Charlotte, in case some of you didn't know. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QVG3jm2JjPE This song has helped me get through my grandpa's mental abuse... it's helpe dme get through my mom being sick all the time, my dad being annoying, people's abuse at school, and other stresses! This song is a great song... if has saved plenty lives! Pass this on if you know someone who has died from suicide or if you are suicidal or have friends who are! It will help!

if there is one thing I could tell the world, I would tell them to fuck off and shove their stupid judgements up their own fucking asses! I would tell them stop being such hypocrites and leave me to God to be judged and tried! I'd say, just leave me alone! I'm better off without you trying to say who I am!

If there was one thing I could tell my friend Jacob right now, I'd tell him how much I miss him and how much I wish he hadn't been speeding the night he died! R.I.P. MY BROTHER! I MISS YOU AND SO DO ALL YOUR OTHER FRIENDS!!!!!

if there was one thing i could say to the people who thought I'd be nothing at all... LOOK AT ME NOW BITCHES! LOOK WHO'S LAUGHING! I'M BETTER THAN YOU THOUGHT I WAS!

I am NOT what you say I am unless you know who I REALLY am!

Learn one thing, forget another... forget one thing, learn another... there ya go! it's all evened out for you!

Don't think that because I used to cut myself, I'm still emo... don't think because I get depressed I'm suicidal! I'm not! I'm actually happier than I've ever been before!

Don't Judge me because you think you know me
Don't pretend to know me because you don't
Don't hate me because you don't know me...
Don't call me anorexic because I'm skinny
Don't call me underweight because I'm smaller than you
don't call me fat because I'm bigger than you
don't call me a bitch unless u know me!
Don't say anything about me because you don't know me... unless you know that it's true... then go ahead!

I'm a bitch when I want to be
But I'm nicer than you think I am!

If you have a problem with me, either deal with it or don't have anything to do with me... there ya go!

"92% of American teens today would die if Abercrombie & Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. If you're part of the 8% that would be laughing their butts off, put this in your profile."

80% of Americans say "I LOVE YOU".

20% actually mean it.

If you honestly are in the 20%, paste this into your profile


Five ways to say I Love You.
German:Ich liebe Du
Spanish:Le amo
Russian:Я люблю Вас
French:Je vous aime
Portuguese:Amo-o



The Theft by Atreyu

He bends and he breaks
If he gives they will take away
His passion, his pain, his grace

He exhales
A thousand black flowers explode
Into butterflies as they're away

Rip them out, take them
Burn to coals as they crush
And leave nothing that
Resembles a soul of a man
See him numb, see him crushed
See him numb, see him crushed
Rip them out, take them
Burn to coals as they crush
And leave nothing that
Resembles a soul of a man
Leave him numb, leave him crushed
Leave him numb, leave him crushed

Just a fire inside one too many times
He's burning over and out as he fails
Up against the raging tides
No more sides
Everything you ever wanted to see
I see it in his eyes
One more time, one more time

Climb down to test the waters
My hands feel like they're rusting away, yeah
So I'll pace around like a lamb before the slaughter
I'll stay here, as long as you let me
Decisions, then, made obvious,
So I will return to where I started, I'll stay there
Unfinished I'll wither away

Rip them out, take them
Burn to coals as they crush
And leave nothing that
Resembles a soul of a man
See him numb, see him crushed
See him numb, see him crushed
Rip them out, take them
Burn to coals as they crush
And leave nothing that
Resembles a soul of a man
Leave him numb, leave him crushed
Leave him numb, leave him crushed

Breathe Into Me- RED

And this is how it feels when I
Ignore the words you spoke to me
And this is where I lose myself
When I keep running away from you

And this is who I am when,
When I don't know myself anymore
And this is what I choose when
It's all left up to me

Breathe your life into me
I can feel you, I’m falling
Falling faster
Breathe your life into me
I still need you
I’m falling, falling
Breathe into me
Breathe into me
Breathe

And this is how it looks when
I am standing on the edge
And this is how I break apart
When I finally hit the ground

And this is how it hurts when I
Pretend I don't feel any pain
And this is how I disappear
When I throw myself away

Breathe into me
Breathe into me
Breathe into me


Nevada Tan "Revolution" (this song is in German, so sorry if you can't understand it.)

fickt euch
fickt....
fickt euch

Ich kann's nicht ab
ständig muss ich mich beweisen
Regeln hier, Pflichten da
Ja klar
bin ich nur dazu da um das zu tun was ihr mir sagt?
Schule, Eltern, Staat
Ich frag mich was geht ab?

Denn seht in unsere Klassen- seht in unsre' Augen
viele behaupten dass die Jugend sich zu viel rausnimmt
doch wir glauben nicht an eure Ideale
Wollen wir eure Initialien auf uns tragen?
Hmm warte! Ist das ne Fangfrage?

Heutzutage dreht die Welt sich nun mal anders
die große Frage ist - blickt ihr's irgendwann mal?
Egal was wir sagen
wir stoßen auf Granit
weil niemand von euch sieht was wirklich mit uns geht
Wir werden Tagtäglich überschwemmt
von Lügen ertränkt
und merken schon früh
wir kriegen nix geschenkt
am heutigen Tag erobern wir den Thron
Wir sagen "Herzlich Willkommen zu unser' Revolution!"

Das ist die Revolution unsrer Generation
-Ja,ja-
Die neue Zeit beginnt und wir starten schon
-Ja, ja, ja-
Das ist die Revolution unsrer Generation
Der Zug der Freiheit fährt von dieser Station

Ständig werden wir in Schubladen gesteckt
Zu oft analysiert und Fehler werden mathematisch aufgedeckt
Doch eure klar definierten Zahlen
auf Papier spiegeln unsre' Situation doch niemals wieder

Heutzutage ziehn' Kids schon mit elf
Pornos ausm' Netz
Pics von toten Irak Soldaten verbreiten sich per MMS
Die Welt schrumpft
Und seit der Nachricht aus PISA
sind alle Schüler dumm und gammeln nur rum
-Nein!-
Wir geben en Scheiß auf eure Meinung
Ihr seid nicht wie wir
Lyric und werdet es nie sein
Wir allein ziehen als Sieger ein
Wir rennen auch ohne Rückenwind durch jede Wand
Habt ihr es langsam erkannt?
Die Revolution in Deutschland hat angefangen
Also ziehn' wir die "FICK DICH" T-Shirts an
Rebellieren, provoziern' Nevada Tan ist jetzt dran
Mit ihrem neuen klang - Wahlprogramm
Und das Motto heißt:" Fang jetzt endlich zu leben an, verdammt!"

Das ist die Revolution unsrer Generation
-Ja, ja, ja-
Die neue Zeit beginnt und wir starten schon
-Ja, ja, ja-
Das ist die Revolution unsrer Generation
-Ja, ja, ja-
Der Zug der Freiheit fährt von dieser Station

Ohne euch ist die Welt nicht mehr so klein
Ohne euch werd ich endlich frei sein,
Ohne euch ist die Welt nicht mehr so klein
Ohne euch werd ich endlich frei sein

Was geht ab in dem geliebten Deutschland?
Für mich ist hier kein Platz
das hab ich langsam erkannt
Am heutigen Tag erobern wir den Thron
Wir sagen "Herzlich Willkommen zu unsrer Revolution!"

Das ist die Revolution unsrer Generation
-Ja, ja, ja-
Die neue Zeit beginnt und wir starten schon
-Ja, ja, ja-
Das ist die Revolution unsrer Generation
-Ja, ja, ja-
Der Zug der Freiheit fährt von dieser Station

Ohne euch ist die Welt nicht mehr so klein
Ohne euch werd ich endlich frei sein
Ohne euch ist die Welt nicht mehr so klein
Ohne euch werd ich endlich frei sein

"Serial slaughtering stranglers
Jugging Juggling juggalos
Folded, fat, floppy-tittied freaks
I C fuckin P's in the house"

Abracadabra boom shacka dae
I'm Violent J, and I'm back like a vertebrae
And I come with a hat full of tricks
Trunk full of Faygo, car full of fat chicks
Hahahahahahahaha, fuck you
Wicked clowns, we'd like to say what up to
The Cobra's, X-men, and Counts, and everybody with clown love
Even sets I've never heard of
Roll into town, and out with the big top
Four cards down, and two more still to drop
And when it does, I pack up and hit the road
Cuz I don't wanna see your head EXPLODE
Toss me an axe, and I'll toss you a dead chicken
Add a buck, you get a two-liter with 'em
And when the genie says on with the show
It's hokus pokus jokers, Great Milenko.

Once again, the psychotic carnival creatures in the haugh
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride
Southwest slithering snakes of darkness come
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride

Shazam BAM, shocka locka lokey
Shaggy the clown back like scoliosis
Call me a psycho-skitso freak
And I'll call you by your name (dick-anus)
Cuz I can give two shits and a fuck
I bounce down Verner in a popcorn clown truck
I'm a circus ninja southwest voodoo wizard.
I grab your gizzard
Jump on the carpet, let's take a spin
Everybody's waitin for the show to begin
Up to the top, by the neck, and let you go
Try to land in a glass of Faygo
Uh, you suck, you missed the fuckin glass
Broken neck, and busted your fuckin ass
But the genie says on with the show
Hokus Pokus Jokers, Great Milenko.

What awaits you after death, rub the lamp and explore
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride
Enter Milenko's Fun House, walk right through the wretched hall
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride

"Fuck em all, fuck em all
Clown dawg, freak dawg
Joker dawg, Milenko dawg"

Visions of joker's cards flashing in your mother's face
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride

Rude Boy and Chooky down wit the clown
First time we ever went to Mexican Town
I remember, we couldn't pay the bill, they got hot
And beat us down in the fuckin parking lot

Tall Jess, Jump Steady, and Nate the Mack
Tagged ICP by the train tracks
And it was on, the dawn of a new day
Magical carpets screaming down the freeway

Walked in a gypsy's tent with a food stamp
And walked out with a magical lamp, yeah
I met Milenko, he gave me 3 wishes
That night, I fucked 3 fat bitches

Then get the fuck with it, forget it
I'll rip your face off, and wipe my ass with it
When the genie says on with the show
Hokus pokus, jokers, Great Milenko

Climb aboard our magic train and join us inside
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride
Fifty-two villians, hammered town, the show must go on
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride
Giant ladies, bearded ladies, midget ladies, ladies!
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride
Clowns of darkness and underneath them comes the cloud
Hokus pokus, joker's ride, come take a spin on a carnie ride

"Fuck that!"



Lifes a bitch and then we die, so FUCK THE WORLD AND LET'S GET HIGH!

Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Life is short
So party we must!



If you'd walk 5,000 miles to spend 5 minutes with someone who you love, put this in your profile.

If you'd give your life for your friend, put this in your profile.

If you'd keep loving someone no matter what, even if they don't love you back, because you still love them, then add this to your profile.


Girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road...
Girl: Slow down. I’m scared.
Guy: No, this is fun.
Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary!
Guy: Then tell me you love me.
Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down!
Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
*Girl hugs him*
Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me.

(In the paper the next day) A motorcycle crashed into a building because of break failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his breaks broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die.

If you would ever do this for someone....then post this on your page A.S.A.P!!!


Hi, I'm Anna.
I weigh 90 pounds
I don't ever eat
I'm so skinny, I swear, you can see my ribs!
I still think that I'm fat.
I am very sick.
If I ever do eat, I make myself sick...
I have pale skin
Dark circles under my eyes
I never hang out with my friends anymore
My hair is all falling out.
Hi, I'm Anna... Anorexia, actually.



ok, my AP family...
AP MOM G00dy2Shoes
dad:
Sons:
Daughters:
sisters: DeleriousMuffins, BlackTearsRedEyes, XXDarkness-DecayXX, Serenity silvermoon
= these girls are the best sisters ever! especially Decay! AKA Taylor!
Brothers:
girlfriend:
boyfriend:
Aunt:
Uncle:
Grandpa: leo2
Grandma
cousins

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  • Vera Rich on October 5
    First of all, may I express my deepest condolences on the death of your grandfather... However, since you clearly had a wonderful relationship with him, please believe, a time will come when the pain will fade into nostalgia, and you will be able to remember the happy times together...

    But while I am writing to you - may I just
    point out that for a Russian to say "Ya lyublyu Vas" in the meaning of "I love you" would seem to my ear and eye a little odd. If it were "Ya lyubyly vas" (with a small "v") he - or she - would be expressing love (or liking) for a group of people - e.g. a whole family - but "Vas" with a capital V would indicate one person with whom the speaker was on formal terms only. The intimate, personal form would be "Ya lyublyu tebya".

    It is perhaps a little unfortunate that Russian has only one verb to cover the whole range of emotion from liking to (passionate) love - unlike other Slavonic languages, which have two completely different verbs for "like" and "love"

    I apologize for having to use transliteration, but I cannot make this box accept Cyrillic!

    (Incidentally, you may be interested to know that my first teacher in Russian was the niece of Lev Tolstoy!)

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  • til the day i die : yo on September 11
    wuz up?
  • til the day i die : yo on September 11
    wuz up?
  • aangie on August 26
    Hey, noticed you like Atreyu and Avenged Sevenfold, have you seen them live? They are awesome, I saw them with Bullet For My Valentine, very reccomended.

    Anyway, just wanted to say thanks for your comments, and I'm loving your poetry. Well done.

    Angie.

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