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Loneliness is a cloaked beggar whose only

escape is through the company of others - ones who share such baggage-

Lay it at the foot of the Cross - uncovered!

Ultimate Love that seemed to have been captured in this song:
http://vodpod.com/watch/92248-breat he-by-michael-w-smith
Make sure you are sitting down.

This haunting poem reveals the personal tragedy of someone who was killed in Scotland's most barbaric and shortest battle. Written by  ©Pat Williams & Patrick Patterson , All rights reserved.Listen to this one!

http://soundcloud.com/mdianne-grotiusbe rry/culloden-moor-6-keeper

"the sun is the Maker's lense
...go ahead
look back".

".. indeed, he who
watches over Israel
slumbers not
nor sleeps." Psalm 121:4

*I'm not alone nor a loner~
but a spray of heavenly dust
in an epidermal composite.

I laugh less, but know more
cause trouble because I want peace.
I'm neither his, hers or anyone's,
but am deeply involved with many.

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Since entering contests and submitting to mainstream publishers, I attained some success. I have had the pleasure to work with AllPoetry's publications , quarterly magazines, and internationally with Kreativ's poetry books, edited and compiled by Myra Lochner aka: myrataal. ( http://allpoetry.com/myrataal)
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About My Critiquing

As a courtesy to those who need a
viewpoint or two from readers, critiquing
is an important ingredient for improvement,
not so much in the way your sacred thoughts
could be written, (as each style has its comfort
zone), but for the clarity of readability.
If you're serious about quality
writing, I owe it to you as a fellow poet!

Once you hear from me in a greeting and check out my page, please let me know what kind of critiquing you expect:


Level one-General comments and critiques which mildly approach the general pragmatics of improving the overall body.

Level Two-General and specific comments that are diplomatically giving a more intense suggestion and/or rewrite. Sometimes they are reviewed on a line-by-line. Ask me only if you aren't overly sensitive and your ego isn't in the front line. Thank you for your trust.
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My poetry may not impress everyone, but much of it will find its way to help develop a reader's third eye, the one that seeks a change and pre-empts complacency. I hope you find the ardent weaver in at least one of them.
I give all glory to the only God, and through the changing power of Jesus Christ who is knowable to anyone who wants a relationship. This is why I left religion.
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  ORDER NOW! Available in  paperback or e-book from Amazon,  Barnes & Noble, and other fine book outlets. Going into its second printing, I can also directly sign one to you by email request.

czeal@hotmail.com

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Myra is a lovely Christian woman, author -producer, publisist, edopathist (creator of a newly developed process of inner healing), social worker and meta-therapist. You can read about her in our internet community of writers.
http://allpoetry.com/myrataal


Are you writing a book? Do you want someone to write the prologue or foreword to introduce you and your work in a way that you as the author wouldn't? I will consider if you ask.
Private message me so we can discuss it.

Thank you for reading.
2010 MWG POETRY CONTEST WINNERS:
http://midwestwg.com/?q=node/2
1st Place, Rhymed: Dianne Berry 1st Place, Unrhymed: Steven Schneer
2nd Place, overall (two winners): Tom Titzer, and Sue Richards

My dear art-angel-- you and your Mother hang the moon for me