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How To Write A Lento

To write a Lento

LENTO

A brief history behind this form:

I had a dream about creating this form, exactly the way it is. This happens to most of my writing. As the name suggests, it is taken from my first name Lencio and rhymed to Cento, an existing form of poetry. It is relatively an easier form. Although this form requires rhyming words, words that have a similar "end-sounds" will also do, for eg: Heaven, Deafen, or few, stew.

A Lento is written in 2 quatrains (a stanza consisting of 4 lines) with a fixed rhyme scheme. All the FIRST words of the verse should rhyme aaaa, bbbb with the first word of the verse and the END of second and the fourth lines should rhyme with a scheme abcb.


All the lines should be more or less of the same length and stand on its own.

One is free to use any figures of speech and it is completely up to the poet whether or not, to rhyme the 1st and the 3rd line.

You can also write 4 verses and call it a double Lento, 6 verses, and it becomes a triple Lento.

Below is an example of a Lento:

                     Composed in winter of Two Thousand Five,
                     Proposed by my dreams, this entire theme,
                     Exposed now for all to write and have fun,
                   Supposed to be easy though it doesn't seem.

                    Two verses of four lines each you will write,
                    Do rhyme the beginning word in every line,
                     Pursue to keep last rhymes in line 2 and 4,
                    Chew your brain a little, you'll do just fine!

For other examples please click on the following links:
allpoetry.com/Poem/1765444
allpoetry.com/Poem/1765669

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  • Azgar
    August 30
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    Interesting thing this poetic form,


  • wakingdevil
    June 23, 2006
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    Wonderful form.I might try it out someday if there's a contest on it How did you get the idea while sleeping
  • individuality gold member
    June 15, 2006
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    Thanks for the information, I have just written my first lento piece Spill ink and twist me into the shape of love...
  • Just Sigrun
    April 29, 2006
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    very nice

    This is brilliant. I have never read a lento before, never even heard of a lento. I am researching new poetry forms and I will have to try this one out. Sounds cool. Thank you for making it easy to understand, too.

  • itllnever
    April 21, 2006
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    Great job on your creation.

    Lento
    A form created by (your name). A poem written in quatrains, with each stanza having the first word on each line rhyme in the stanza. So it looks like this.
    Line 1: A
    Line 2: A; b
    Line 3: A
    Line 4: A; b

    Line 5: C
    Line 6: C; d
    Line 7: C
    Line 8: C; d

    Example:
    Composed in winter of Two Thousand Five
    Proposed by my dreams this entire theme,
    Exposed now for all to write and have fun
    Supposed to be easy though it doesn't seem.

    Two verses of four lines each you will write
    Do rhyme the beginning word in every line,
    Pursue to keep last rhymes in line 2 and 4
    Chew your brain a little you'll do just fine!
    Copyright © 2005 (your name)

    This is the way it should look!

  • NooNiThEWitcH
    February 27, 2006
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    Hi i sent you a message but you didn't reply to me.. so i'm using your Lento in my poetry research as one of the new forms of poetry. I hope you don't mind. I'll be adding where i got it from in the Works cited at the end of the research. I also took the first stanza which you put on this page:
    "Composed in winter of Two Thousand Five,
    Proposed by my dreams, this entire theme,
    Exposed now for all to write and have fun,
    Supposed to be easy though it doesn't seem."

    I hope you don't mind, but i could not wait long for your answer as my friend and i have to hand in the research on wednesday morning...

    I might try to write it someday... lol
    As for other people.. keep on writing.. and hope to see some cool stuff in this form

    Nooni

  • persephone-hazard
    February 4, 2006
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    Deeply cool!

    See, I find it deeply cool that you have invented your own poetic form! Deeply cool indeed. Perhaps one day I shall do the same :-)

  • raspberry Greeters member
    January 31, 2006
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    U have my applause.. I have myself done two forms of my own poetry and would love to welcome poets with such creativity to publish their own forms.. Welcome to the community

  • HeavenScent4U
    January 31, 2006
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    Very interesting

    Be Well and Be Blessed

  • Josy2
    January 27, 2006
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    Yes, I do lencio

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 27, 2006
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    If you still wanna enter, I can extend the date Joss.


    Lencio

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 27, 2006
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    YEs, its gonna be a real trophy!!!

  • Josy2
    January 27, 2006
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    Hi I am late for your contest. I thought tomorrow ends

  • cafegroundzero silver member
    January 26, 2006
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    I throw my own self at the mercy

    I have just read, for the first time that I'm aware, a lento. I think I can, am meant to do this poem style, if I study just a while. If I do well I will smile, if for just a little while.

    This is better than taking a drink, I think, of alcohol, and staring at the wall, down the hall, heeding not The Call.

  • Rose Anne Winter
    January 26, 2006
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    questions

    It seems like a cool challenge. Were you serious about the actual trophy?
    darkinocenceangel

  • Darianna
    January 26, 2006
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    Hmmm another form to try to get me out of this rut of wordlessness I'm in! Thankyou, it sounds inspiring! If I don't make your contest, then I'll send you a link anyways to it and give you recognition for the form as well of course!!! HUGS, Dari xxx

  • Dishy
    January 24, 2006
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    Intresting .

  • MariGoes gold member
    January 24, 2006
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    Very interesting form, I lie trying forms
    Will certainly try this one, if not on time to enter your contest, then for future post

  • twirliperli
    January 24, 2006
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    hey wow this is pretty cool very interesting
    u know at least you bring new way for people to show or ecpress
    u know to write down their stuff their poetry. !!!!!!!!!!!
    hey i hope this contes id fair game ok lol nice job
    ttyl -Perla

  • The Third Eye
    January 24, 2006
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    neat! interesting style, though i've thought of writing this way before. for the moment.... i'll just let my fingers go type type type..... my mind think think think....
    Edited on Jan 24, 5:44 because ''.

  • MurderComesReality
    January 23, 2006
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    thanks for teaching but its kinda not helpful cuz ive started to write that way but at least now i know the name of the style im usin well thanks again and great use of poem to explain ans show an example well time for school gots to go

  • AngelSeeker silver member
    January 23, 2006
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    OK this sounds fun. I can't wait to try. I hope I do the form justice. Great idea. Patti

  • jasminerose gold member
    January 23, 2006
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    Thank you... this is so great!!! I love that you explained this so thoroughly and I am going to give it a whirl for your contest!! Can not wait to get my pen moving!! Jasminerose
  • KindredDreamer
    January 21, 2006
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    Wow, this is so nifty. It reminds me of some of a little my poetry sometimes. I love playing with words, so I really like this, and though most of my free form and my rhyming is accidental, i'll definitely give it a try. Good goin'!

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 21, 2006
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    No Hugh, as I have explained it "Len" comes from my name Lencio and "to" is just to make it sound with an existing form Cento. Not the term used in music. Although this word does exist, the name for my form comes from the explanation above.

    Lencio

  • hugh wyles silver member
    January 20, 2006
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    Does the Italian word "Lento" meaning 'slow' or 'slowly' have any particular significance here?

  • onealone
    January 20, 2006
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    thanks for sharing....Mwah
  • it all i know
    January 20, 2006
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    good. and wholesome.

    ok, i don't want to come in here and rain on your parade, but this is cool. and your addition to this site? probably appreciated. hopefully. but whatever, you type, you get what comes to you. ha.

  • HomemadeSin
    January 20, 2006
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    It seems that all along some of my style has been similar to a Lento...wow, thanks for the reminder that this style exists... I almost thought my poetry had gone the way of the limerick.

  • daZed and confuZed
    January 20, 2006
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    I like this idea!

    By the way.. are you Italian? If you are, is your name pronounced sounding like 'Lencho' or 'lencheeo'?

    -- dana
  • Stix
    January 20, 2006
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    Amazingly wicked

    HAHA THIS IS SO SWEET!

    I love new forms of anything, and that is a wickedly wicked instructional example you posted.

  • Ironhead silver member
    January 20, 2006
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    Very intelligent design

    Very interresting indeed. I think that the various forms of poetry turns writing into almost a word game. Most of my poetry is free hand or rhyming just as Catz is. I may try your style but with my writing technique of just blasting words down then arranging a coherent idea out of them, it might prove more of a challenge. Thank you for sharing and I hope to read more poems in your brand new style.

  • catz Moderators member
    January 20, 2006
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    I enjoy learning of a new poetry form. I'm actually very remiss in writing the various forms, a lot of my own poetry being free form, and even the somewhat normal rhyming is usually form by accident...lol...and I also love Haiku... I know, I need to work on the others, too and your new form here looks interesting

    Thanks for sharing it and I'll give it a try. Also will save this to my bookmarks for future reference.

    Dee

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 20, 2006
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    Thanks a lot, I have just had a look and commented on it. Will need a little bit of work. All in all a good try!


    Lencio
  • Pome
    January 20, 2006
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    Hi lencio sunshine: I tried my hand at your new form of poetry. If you are interested you can read it at allpoetry.com/Poem/1768696
    Thanks for the inspiration. -Pome

  • John Doe
    January 20, 2006
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    Very interesting form with a bit of subtlety that I liked. I'll definitely give this a whirl and see how it goes. Thanks for the inspiration, Lencio.

  • Sai Babas Lotus
    January 20, 2006
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    Awesome dear poet pal!

    Lencio, first of all, heartiest congratulations on creating a brand new super interesting form. You reminded me of my Celtic and Welsh Poetry class taught by Rae (Ayizan is her name on the boards) wherein we had to follow a strict rigid structure for the various styles we learnt. Hard work, but very beautiful.

    Thanks for the BRILLIANT example Lento. That is so cool! I'll give this a try shortly, maybe for your contest. Let's see

    Can you send across the link to the form which Gary wrote and you mentioned is hard but your trying and he has several examples. I'd really like to see what's it like and maybe try a few.

    Love Genie's example. I'll make a note of it.

    Cheers, Goodluck and God Bless! May this form spread far and wide.

    Charishma


  • January 20, 2006
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    Great

    Thank you for sharing your idea - and the creative example ^^ I often struggle with rhyme and your version offers more liberal possibilities ^^
    Thank you
  • salparadise
    January 19, 2006
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    It is certainly worth an experiment. Playing with the endless possibilities of language certainly has its appeal. I'll give it try when the time seems right. Thanks for sharing this with me.

  • Kilrah
    January 19, 2006
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    very interesting. Thank you for sharing

  • metrophobiac
    January 19, 2006
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    Interesting. Been wanting to stretch my wings and learn new styles. I am book marking this. Thank you for this informative column, it helps those of us serious about stretching...it gives us more information...thank you again. Bekah

  • StoneLion
    January 19, 2006
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    Very clever and intersting form! I wish that my dreams were so inspiring! Thanks for sharing this form and take care!

  • Scotlass
    January 19, 2006
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    How clever of you to create and name your own form of verse. I must try this for myself - although my writing tends to have a style of it's own (that I haven't named yet, ha ha) and may be too free-flow to alter. Well done and very interesting.

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 19, 2006
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    Thank you genielassie. I will be hosting a contest on it soon, but you are always welcome to try out this form and post it for us to read. You did great with your first attempt, I am sure those who love rhyme, will do great with this form as you!

    Love and light,
    Lencio

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    January 19, 2006
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    Try as I may to weave a thought
    My words are threads adrift, unbound
    By twists of wind a few I can
    Apply to verses; beauty bound.

    Compliant though my mind is not
    Definant muse she comes to pass
    Reliant upon things I feel
    Suppliant thoughts I think alas!

    A first attempt...lol... I like rhyme, and so this form is rather appealing to me. I find it to be a terrific form.

    I didn't see any syllabic count or meter applied, which is good, leaving it open doesn't create word restrictions or inhibitions on expressing thoughts.

    s and best wishes... ~genielassie~
  • Pome
    January 19, 2006
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    Sounds interesting and I am looking for new forms to write in .. a challenge! Keep dreaming.. I dream too in music and fashion designs.... love it! Great contest.
  • Aurora Ceres gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    This is fantastic...what a brilliant idea. I love a challenge!
  • Ir.muse
    January 19, 2006
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    This is a great thing to do.Thanks for sharing with us such a new form.
    Shahrzad

  • Eeyores Buddy
    January 19, 2006
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    Well, I've never tried this form, to be honest. However, I may consider to try this after reading about it. To me it looks quite difficult, but it's the challenge of writing something new that may get me and possibly others to have a go Useful post, I shall applaud
  • gryphonpoet
    January 19, 2006
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    I'll have to give this form a try. It has a different sound to my mental ear. Certainly unique to rhyme the first word and Im ready to give it a go. :-)

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    Well my friend very thought provoking post..and very enriching to see...my best wishes..and regards..

  • lonely and free
    January 19, 2006
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    Yes I like this a lot. It makes the lines flow from the first words. I will try it soon. It is musical and really appeals to my sense of the dramatic. great idea well done!!

  • grannyeri gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    Unique for sure, this new form of yours. I am sure many new forms have been created on this site, pixue for one. Who knows what the next one will be.

  • NooNiThEWitcH
    January 19, 2006
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    Brilliant

    that was really good... you are very creeative...
    but i still find it difficult lol i'm not exactly good at rhyming in the first place

    i'll book mark this and practice later...
    keep on writing.. you did a very good explanation here

    Nooni

  • Michele La Pointe
    January 19, 2006
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    i'll also buck up 50 points towards a contest... because aside from that, i'm just not up to the challenge of trying it today lol (i should never wonder why my ass is as big as it is) LAZY

    interesting though... it'll be challenging to rhyme those first words without seeming forced or not really having meaning... my brain hurts

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 19, 2006
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    thank you Vic, I really appreciate it!


    Lencio
  • Philogos gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    Interesting project. If you decide to set a contest for Lentos to get people writing them, I'll put up 50 points towards it vic
  • Bella-Malta
    January 19, 2006
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    Bravo!

    This was interested - I thought of a lento which reminded me of music or a ball! Will give it a go ! Good idea! Bella-Malta

  • romantic visionary
    January 19, 2006
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    Thanks for posting this. Always like to see the forms people have created. Like the two rhyme schemes. May try this in the future. ^_^

  • masterblaster gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    Hi, sounds interesting to try, lento in Italian means slow,lol, this is an interesting form, so when my brain has decided to work again, it does not like the cold, and this morning we had freezing fog, yuck, I will give it a try, good one my friend, all the best, hugs Di

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 19, 2006
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    Yes, that another reason I realised the name for the form suited so right, as I love music. lol!!! I hope to see you trying this form soon. I will be having a contest shortly. Right now I am trying the form Gary (getsbetter) has created. It is quite a tough form, but a very interesting one, and he has written quite a few already.

    Take care,
    Lencio

  • Starhiker
    January 19, 2006
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    Very interesting, Lencio, I will take a look into this new form, and maybe I will manage to write something in it. I'll just look around for other examples from you, and maybe from other brave poets, before I leap into this new form.

    I looked up Lento, and all I could find was this...

    len·to (Music)
    adv. & adj.
    In a slow tempo. Used chiefly as a direction.

    n. pl. len·tos
    A lento passage or movement.


    Could be that some who know the music-expression lento will read your poems slow. You have my applause, my friend! Jim
    Edited on Jan 19, 6:10 because 'Added the definition of Lento... '.

  • lencio-sunchild
    January 19, 2006
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    Thanks Udit, I hope it gains some popularity here! I feel quite excited that my "Denunciation" has got a lot of comments.

  • Raazi gold member
    January 19, 2006
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    I was waiting for you to write this. Why don't you ask Kevin and have it syndicated. That's what Jim (starhiker) did as well.
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