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My writing is sometimes emotion-based, drawn from my personal life and views.
Then again, certain poems will have nothing to do with either. I will mentally and emotionally place myself into a situation to write about it. So a poem may seem personal but isn't.
Isn't all poetry personal though...whether it's written from the poet's personal life or not?
I seldom write rhyme preferring free-verse. I do enjoy reading a well done rhyme though.


I am here to learn and share. All comments are welcome; positive and negative alike.

If you read one of my writes and care to leave a serious critique I would be most appreciative. Improvement is my goal.

  • Last seen on Jul 19 11:28 AM. Member since June 12, 2006.
  • I'm a obsidian idea poet for 557 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "ya can't make orange juice out of lemons!".
  • I am a woman (United States)
  • I have 557 comments, 30 poems

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  • Nicole Hanna on February 23, 2008
    I love your user ID. I wear glasses so thick that looking directly in the general direction of the sun would burn my retinas. lol.
  • E t e r n i t y on September 18, 2006
    Thnk you for the lovely comment on my poem! Its like.. referring to the smoke rings and vodka kisses... I meant that to be like a veil pulled over reality.. Bringing it to end in fantasy. We were both so in love with the idea of being in love that we fantasized about it and leaped into it before we even thought about it. Thank you again for the luffly comment! <3

    -Syns
  • Poetically Correct on July 30, 2006
    Hi about to read your poems but I would like for you to read and critique mine ecspecially after i read a critique of yours on the oceans of emotions poem. Well lets start get back to me soon, I hope to see your comments and hopefully applauds on my pieces. If you liked the key part you'll luv my "SENSATIONAL MESSAGE"
  • rishi on July 10, 2006
    Hello Coke, I've just posted an invitational contest and you are among those who are invited. I'd be honored if you participate in this contest. thx .. Here is the link allpoetry.com/poem/2116709

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