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Clinically Cynical

Hey, my name is Harlan. I've never really written poetry before, but I have this account because my friend Kelcey made it for me, and she's also making me actually write the poem. I don't know much about poetry so I can't say really what my style is or anything, so I'm just doing whatever comes to mind.

  • Last seen on Nov 1 10:26 PM 2007. Member since June 27, 2007.
  • I'm a amber angel poet for 3 comments.
  • I am a 15 year old guy from Tennessee (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm gaming.
  • I have 3 comments

My Poetry

  • My thoughts lose focus / when I listen to a story in which she plays even the smallest part. / My stomach flips upside down / when I spot her name in writing. / My eyes can't even blink / whe
    27 lines, 6 comments, July 30, 2007. In Personal, Love, Pain
  • Every night I'd climb into bed, / Cling to my pillow and close my eyes. / I'd let thoughts of you run through my head, / and I dreamt that maybe one day you'd be mine. / But as of now, all those dreams have fled, /
    26 lines, 9 comments, July 1, 2007. In Personal, Love, Pain

Guest Book

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  • Mommas Fallen Angel on August 16, 2007
    Hey! Whatcha doin? Just thought I'd leave you a comment and read some of your poems. I've heard they are really good and wanted to check them out. Talk to ya later!
    Megan
  • Forlorn Dreams on August 1, 2007
    You're page still looks so blank! Add a background or something, it's lacking color. Majorly. But I can give it lots of smilies!!! Look a cute little puppy ! And a sweet little kitty . And this is megaman Is he like a video game or something? You nerd And LOOK *EEK* He is so cute! Look this is me when you say a big word and LOOKIE a star! The monkey is Chelsea see? And a shroom! , whats the need for poison and a hug you nedd a hug I want a hug! Come back and give me a hug!!! Whats this? ? And pacman He's cool, I like that game. But I always lose! And a tiny little !! He is slow, like me, like right now. ok last one ... !! Wooo! Alien! Ok well message me back, you are missed!
    Kelcey
    .... HAHAHA ... it was cute I'm leaving I swear!


    *Giggle*
  • lexie like woah on July 27, 2007
    poetry comes from the heart.. it doesnt have to fit others peoples beliefs or they dont have to like it (unless ur entering it in a contest of course) seriously, i dont give a flying peice of shiznit about what peepz think and i personally think i suck... but i still get good reviews... people will criticise, and u can take the criticsism as saomething good and help urself out or u can just lower urself... i make something good out of it and edit my poems, but i wont change the meaning of the poem for anyone.. and dats wat would make u a better poet.. best of luck on ap...
  • Forlorn Dreams : HARLAN! on July 11, 2007
    I want to read another one of your poems... which means you need to write one. Puhwease!! For me? lol I'm looking forward to it, bye
    Kelcey

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