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I am not you, i am not them, i am me. I am a good christian at times, at others a bad one. I am not perfect, but far from it. I strive for perfection, but it does not come easily. Sometimes i am right with God, sometimes I have problems. Sometimes I am stupid enuff not to let God help me with them. I am one of the crowd, sometimes I'm not. I have been called an a*, and at the same time been called sweet. I write what i feel, and feel what i write. I am blunt in what i write, because i am usualy blunt in what i say. But enough about me, if you want to know more, get to know me. Peace and Love through Christ.


And many years later.....


I don't actually remember how old i was when i wrote that intro, but it feels like a long time ago. My spelling was alright, punctuation a bit horrible, and the capitalization problems haven't gotten any better.

This is an apology for the actual quality of the writing. Maybe I am just being snobbish towards myself, but most of that seems to be complete rubbish. There was no imagery, no color, no feeling. There was decently communicated emotion in some cases, but for the most part it was complete crap. And if i had the chance, i would write it all over again.

I am better now, but still have a long way to go till i consider myself anything other than a rank amateur. Maybe i will post the better stuff at some point. Maybe not.

  • Last seen on Jan 23 11:45 PM. Member since May 13, 2003.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 88 comments.
  • I am a 21 year old guy from Arkansas (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
  • I have 88 comments, 31 poems, 2 stories

My Poetry

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My Stories

  • It might walk upright from out of the inferno, May be coming horseback through deep snow, It's ragged and fat hungry as hell, Evil is alive
    1018 lines, January 23. In 600-2000 words
  • In the forgotten places of the world, in the hidden realms, a shakening occurs. In the dead and unyeilding an awakening has begun. In the realms of myst and faery there is an e
    472 lines, 3 comments, March 3, 2004. In <200 lines, Fantasy, Other

Guest Book

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  • Rodsie on August 10, 2004
    Well I really like a lot of your poems keep it up. Peace
  • AudienceOfOne on February 17, 2004
    thanks for the comments!
  • SaphireAngel on August 12, 2003
    Nice page billy bob, i love your lil description of yourself, its very confusing but yet it makes sooo much sense. I still think that you need to write some more, b/c you are talented, if you just werent to lazy to put it n2 words....but ne ways, keep up the gw! ~*tTyL*~
    %*Crys*%
  • Clay on August 2, 2003
    if i was born yesterday and died tomorow, none would i have but you my sorrow.... gonna write somethin from that, but didnt wanna do it right now

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