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Choirboy222

I am new in poetry, the ones that are posted are the only ones I have, so whatever critique can be given, I'd love to hear it so I can improve.

My Poetry

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  • Night
    The candle is fading
    The earth stands still
    79 lines, July 30
  • Outside of a Dream
    I’ve been dreaming
    Of a wandering love
    43 lines, 2 comments, May 13. In Love
  • My Final Song
    My Final song, my life, which soothes my fading soul
    My final song, my breath, whispering heavenly words
    32 lines, May 13
  • Alone
    Sometimes a solo is the sweetest sound
    So simple, so true
    27 lines, May 13. In Spiritual

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