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ChildTheForsaken

Well as you can see im in college, im kind of crazy. Ive gone through alot in my life and most of that is what impacts my poetry.

I Loosely follow poetry rules and i write in free verse.

  • Last seen on Oct 21 10:08 PM. Member since October 14, 2005.
  • I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 29 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Lost in the stream".
  • I am a 18 year old guy (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a College Student.
  • Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/forsakenandalone
  • I have 29 comments

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 15   Show all Search
  • Cold dawns give light to Frozen tundras of thought
    5 lines, 1 comment, August 10, 2007
  • The pressure builds in my chest,
    It makes it hard to take a breath.
    22 lines, 2 comments, June 22, 2006. In Love
  • You toss the bottle back and laugh,
    Friends around you all smile and cheer.
    29 lines, 2 comments, January 1, 2006. In Other
  • The last thing I wanted was for you to be afraid,
    It’s only a little darkness, lack of light, some shade.
    27 lines, December 31, 2005. In Dark

My Stories

Guest Book

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  • froglover on October 20, 2005
    Thank you for your encouraging comment on The Thirteenth of Adar. I'm not sure if it is a Jewish holiday these days, but in Esther and Mordecai's day it had meaning. I had never heard of it, myself, until I read Esther. I think they called it Purim. Exchanging gifts reminds me of Christmas, so maybe the early Christians borrowed the idea.
  • Elven Rajamala on October 17, 2005
    All your poems are awsome and I enjoy reading them. Each one is different in its' own way. From what I can tell, you're an awsome writer and I hope you don't let it slip from you. Words are one of the strongest things we have and for some words are the easiest to speak with than their voice. Great poetry, don't listen to anyone who tries to tell you otherwise, can't wait to read what else you have.

    ~E. Rajamala aka Shadow Child~

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