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- Reminiscence -

People are changing and it's ripping me apart
Speak your mind, it's the one true art
These faces are blind, make misconceptions
Did they ever really hear my questions?

I know what you've said, I played it by ear
I knew who you were back more than a year
Are we really that different, our struggles, our minds?
It's the only conclusion I've been able to find.

Will you forget me when we've parted our ways
Your cross-road leaves, my cross-road stays
If anything to ask for, this is my request
Recall our beginning, don't dwell on the rest.

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Hope you like my stuff, but if not, leave some constructive criticism. I shall approach it with an open mind.
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  • Last seen 2 days ago. Member since October 3, 2004.
  • I'm a pyrite eye poet for 1093 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "patheticism".
  • I am a 17 year old girl (England)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm enjoying the sunsets..
  • I have 1,093 comments, 13 contests

My Poetry

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    The remainder of omniscience is segregated between minds.
    Within each individual this sliver of omniscience coalesces with seclusion,
    26 lines, September 30. In Life
  • How Did We End Up Here?
    Driving through the half light of an innumerable score of fragmented memories,
    parts of names and faces clouded in opacity bubble to the surface of my mind,
    23 lines, 1 comment, September 18. In Personal, Society, Thoughts, Weird, Life
  • Feather
    A feather fell from the sky today,
    a small white smudge against the faded-amber sand.
    33 lines, September 7. In Thoughts, Nature, Life
  • A Mass of Faces
    A mass of faces that I can distinguish instantaneously
    moves around me, seeking the circle to which I am not part of.
    14 lines, 2 comments, August 29. In Personal

Guest Book

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  • alsy6917 on May 29
    hey. this is like a one time thing, CaN i interview you real quick. write back asap. this is a for a senior project on poetry. my name is chelsea childress.
  • Viva La Vie Boheme on May 18
    Another from England! Ha, good to know I'm not alone The only other British people I've met (or at least person living in the vicinity) or come across on AP have been 30+... it's refreshing to see someone younger

    I'll leave your poetry alone now.
  • xitsthechokinkindx on February 5
    haha.
    pyritie poet
    Xp
  • ImprintedAFTERMATH : Hey on January 15
    You commented on my poem "White Space". Thank you very much. I dont get on here much so I wasnt able to supply a thank you in a timely fashion. Ill take that honorable mention and hang it proudly.
    -Jonah

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