im a 13 yr. old whos been writing for about 2 months...
i started out when i got my heart broken by some chick and the poem just flowed out of me
please leave a comment i hate to see when someone looks at my work but doesent comment, for i am a yound writer and need ways to fix my writing..
thankyou for visiting me and come back again
P.S. plz look at all my work casue i need some pointers on all of it so thankyou
i started out when i got my heart broken by some chick and the poem just flowed out of me
please leave a comment i hate to see when someone looks at my work but doesent comment, for i am a yound writer and need ways to fix my writing..
thankyou for visiting me and come back again
P.S. plz look at all my work casue i need some pointers on all of it so thankyou
- Last seen on Nov 19 12:26 AM. Member since October 25, 2005.
- I'm a peridot parrot poet for 37 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Strangers always have the best candy".
- I am a 13 year old person
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My Poetry
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As I stare into abyss
I see her through the silver mist34 lines, 10 comments, November 1, 2005. In Fantasy -
When I look up into the star lit sky
I wonder to myself with a tear in my eye20 lines, 24 comments, October 26, 2005. In Love -
Life is just a crazy game game
some want fortune13 lines, 2 comments, October 26, 2005. In Personal
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StoryOfaLostLove on November 16, 2005wow, i wanted to thank you for the quote and extend a welcome, i didn't realize you were new here. If you need someone to talk to, here i is, my name's Mandie, and if you have aim, my sn is astoryinhereyes . AP is an awesome place for poets, and it's a really accepting community, for fear of sounding stupid. I plan to read some of your work, and remember, I always will have two open ears if you need someone to talk to.
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Taur-amandil on November 2, 2005I said it in my comment on your poem, but I'll say it again. You are definetly a born talent. Keep this up and you are going to get places with this. Nice stuff.
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hey! always glad to see a new writer here! welcome! my name is sharisse! hope to meet you soon. always work on improving your writing and style. you are never to old to learn something new. i believe you are a great writer and will get better with every poem or story. keep the great work. also i donated some points to you. hope you go them. keep it up and if you ever need someone to comment on your poems or just someone to talk to i am here for you. i will always be your friend.
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seiteki on October 28, 2005I want to out reach a warm welcome and I really liked your quote. I will be reading all of your work and commenting.
