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Hey there!
I'm Chance and this is my page.
I love writing poetry, but haven't done so for a few years. It feels good to be back

I really don't know if my poetry is good or not, so please enlighten me! Constructive criticism (Or praise!) is always welcome, but don't just say my poetry is 'bad', give me a reason for it!

Ouch. Just looked at my poems and I seem like such a miserable, brooding sort of person. I'm really not! I'm gonna write some more happy, lighthearted stuff soon; I feel depressed reading alot of my old stuff XD Except for the Vogon poem. Love it! Anyway, you can stop reading this now and start reading my poems (Y)

Thanks for reading!

Last seen 1 day ago. Member since March 26.
I'm a peridot parrot poet for 33 comments.
My mood is , and quote is "Got My First Trophy!!! Awwwwww Yeeeaaaaahhh!!".
I am a 16 year old girl (Great Britain)
When I'm not writing, I'm Acting! Or just chillin'. Less of the latter recently... DAMN YOU GCSEs!!!!.
I am in the groups Emotions
I have 33 comments, 1 contest, 11 poems

My Poetry

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So That's Just It?

So that’s just it? So long with nothing to remember you by
Except for the love and hate bites on my neck

23 lines, 2 comments, October 8. In Love, Life, Thoughts
Knowing

I guess we were never together, really.
But when we were alone, you and I

31 lines, 4 comments, September 1. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Love
Night Running

I feel like I can't hold back anymore
I want to break out of myself

43 lines, 3 comments, July 1
Grow Up

I told you that I loved you
And you said it was infatuation.

45 lines, 1 comment, June 20. In Contest, Personal, Humor, Love, Life, Thoughts

Guest Book

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wandyway on September 3

Chance, I have just realised a serious error in your allpoetry page. Why, oh why oh why, does your 'When I'm not writing, I'm...' say everything but the obvious?

'When I'm not writing, I'm having passionate sex with Rafi on tabletops.'

There. I fixed it for you
caedwyn on July 1

hi i just read your poem "Night Running" its really good i loved it ^^
Tallullah on July 1

You just need a silver trophy and you'll be all set. :}
Oh, & are we gunna have an after-party, or be sensible?
whitecoffee on June 30

Congrats on your trophies!!