CelticAngel1605 at All poetry

When you say you love me-
the world goes still, so still inside and
when you say you love me-
for a moment there's no one else... alive

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My Poetry

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The Wish

I wish I knew the thoughts the tumble of words

33 lines, 1 comment, March 24, 2008
David

Hard marble
soft skin

14 lines, 6 comments, September 12, 2006. In Love
Conclusion

The end of a book
shut the cover

11 lines, September 12, 2006. In Hope
Pretty Lies

I can be so pretty
so pretty

18 lines, 12 comments, August 8, 2006. In Personal, Love, Dark

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Meeting the Maker (of a Black Destiny)

13123 lines, 1 comment, August 31, 2005. In 200-1500 lines, Adult, Romance, Science fiction
A Black Destiny (Ch9) THE END!!!

720 lines, 2 comments, April 7, 2005. In <200 lines, Adult, Romance, Science fiction
A Black Destiny (Ch. 8)

Maharani looked at Aelfric questioningly. "A Lever?" She asked. He nodded, his grin broadening. He wrapped his arms around her, pulling her body flush against his and pressing

888 lines, March 1, 2005. In <200 lines, Crime, Screenplay, Spiritual

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Delgni on April 25, 2006

I realized that I had never actually commented on your profile page before. So, comment, comment. There we go.
CelticAngel1605 on April 19, 2005

thank you. You are a lot nicer than I expected, glad we could be civilized about this.
myron on April 19, 2005

yes i was 2 blunt i know - i had a look at what i said. i think i was reacting to his wanted a critical response - he should not have ticked that box for this particular poem, as he wasn't writing poetry, he was expressing his pain in a cliched and careless manner (in my opinion).

you seem like a nice person; i'm sorry for being unreasonable...thanks for being nice...
CelticAngel1605 on April 19, 2005

Listen, I wasn't trying to make you feel bad, I simply suggested that instead of being blunt about how you felt about his poetry you might offer CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, the kind that could better his writing. And he says all of his writing sucks, which it doesn't. He's in a really low place right now and I think that maybe before you say something like what you said just please consider that it wasn't supposed to be good, it was unedited and it was his outlet. I'm sorry if I let my anger out on you, that was wrong of me, but I hope you find that my suggestions are not ll that unreasonable. And I wasn't looking to be forgiven, merely consodered. Thanks for your time