Basics about me:
I love writing and I am very proud of my work. I am very critical of others poems so I dont usually critique much. I feel that most of my poetry is better than alot of others, I cant help it, and I dont know why I think this way about my poetry because I dont think this way about anything else!
So maybe it is good to have something you feel you are better at then most.
This is my all time favorite poem in the world!!
Emily Dickinson
Part Three: Love
XII
I CANNOT live with you,
It would be life,
And life is over there
Behind the shelf
The sexton keeps the key to,
Putting up
Our life, his porcelain,
Like a cup
Discarded of the housewife,
Quaint or broken;
A newer Sèvres pleases,
Old ones crack.
I could not die with you,
For one must wait
To shut the other’s gaze down,—
You could not.
And I, could I stand by
And see you freeze,
Without my right of frost,
Death’s privilege?
Nor could I rise with you,
Because your face
Would put out Jesus’,
That new grace
Glow plain and foreign
On my homesick eye,
Except that you, than he
Shone closer by.
They ’d judge us—how?
For you served Heaven, you know,
Or sought to;
I could not,
Because you saturated sight,
And I had no more eyes
For sordid excellence
As Paradise.
And were you lost, I would be,
Though my name
Rang loudest
On the heavenly fame.
And were you saved,
And I condemned to be
Where you were not,
That self were hell to me.
So we must keep apart,
You there, I here,
With just the door ajar
That oceans are,
And prayer,
And that pale sustenance,
Despair!
ok, im done now
I love writing and I am very proud of my work. I am very critical of others poems so I dont usually critique much. I feel that most of my poetry is better than alot of others, I cant help it, and I dont know why I think this way about my poetry because I dont think this way about anything else!
So maybe it is good to have something you feel you are better at then most.
This is my all time favorite poem in the world!!
Emily Dickinson
Part Three: Love
XII
I CANNOT live with you,
It would be life,
And life is over there
Behind the shelf
The sexton keeps the key to,
Putting up
Our life, his porcelain,
Like a cup
Discarded of the housewife,
Quaint or broken;
A newer Sèvres pleases,
Old ones crack.
I could not die with you,
For one must wait
To shut the other’s gaze down,—
You could not.
And I, could I stand by
And see you freeze,
Without my right of frost,
Death’s privilege?
Nor could I rise with you,
Because your face
Would put out Jesus’,
That new grace
Glow plain and foreign
On my homesick eye,
Except that you, than he
Shone closer by.
They ’d judge us—how?
For you served Heaven, you know,
Or sought to;
I could not,
Because you saturated sight,
And I had no more eyes
For sordid excellence
As Paradise.
And were you lost, I would be,
Though my name
Rang loudest
On the heavenly fame.
And were you saved,
And I condemned to be
Where you were not,
That self were hell to me.
So we must keep apart,
You there, I here,
With just the door ajar
That oceans are,
And prayer,
And that pale sustenance,
Despair!
ok, im done now
- Last seen on Aug 31 11:04 PM 2008. Member since December 29, 2003.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 303 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Whatever happens, happens".
- I am a 21 year old woman from Washington (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a mom.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/nightlightforjoslyn
- I am in the groups Cutters Noncutters and ExCutters
- I have 303 comments, 1 addline, 108 poems, 1 story
Poems I'm focused on
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I sing the words but I feel nothing in them27 lines, 5 comments, June 2, 2008
My Poetry
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"I need you to move on" you say,
"but dont go too far"11 lines, June 20, 2008
My Stories
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“ The cup is not half empty as pessimists say, as far as he is concerned nothing is left in the cup; a whole cup of nothing for him to indulge in, since the voice of ambition h
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doesnt itsoundblank on March 29, 2007hey thanx for adding me, ill add you too! what ya been up to anyways?
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Rizzo-in-the-box on March 28, 2007how old is your lil girl??? mine is 4 months (almost 5) i added you on myspace
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SoleDiavolo on March 14, 2007awww. thank you for the comment. wow, you had a baby! thats cool. it sucks that we dont talk much, i thought you'd forgotten me..
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Celluloid Dream on July 25, 2006hey, just seeing how you are. if you reply to this i would suggest you do it on myspace cuz i dont come on here hardly ever but yeah im gunna be a mom here any day, im having a girl, Kylei! the dad left me but oh well-who needs guys..but yeah <3 ya lots
