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• Member since April 25, 2007.
• I'm a new dragon poet for 6,944 comments.
• I am a woman from Michigan (United States)
• When I'm not writing, I'm working and doing my hobbies.
• I am in the groups A group for animal lovers
• I have 6,944 comments, 179 poems

Poems I'm focused on

• Broken Heart

  When I do see someone who is
  hurting, the wet tears fell down

  11 lines, 38 comments, May 6, 2008. In Pain, Sadness
• Little Butterfly

  Little butterfly,
  you spread your wings,

  24 lines, 49 comments, January 22, 2008. In Butterfly, Animals, Nature, Other
• Memories of Mother

  When I see the red rose / I think about my mom / that it was her favorite flower / She was so beautiful / inside and outside / When I see t

  44 lines, 44 comments, May 22, 2007. In Grief, Memories, Mother, Sadness
• Life Is.....

  Life is like a maple tree / waiting for someone to walk / by and look at the colorful leaves / / Life is like a church bell / ringing for

  16 lines, 44 comments, April 26, 2007. In Life, Inspiritational, Others

My Poetry

• Love

  1 lines, 4 comments, March 17. In Love
• Compassion

  I walked out of the Christmas program to use the restroom, by the wall I saw a you cuddle up, I heard you crying, to show the compassion I

  9 lines, 4 comments, March 16. In Inspirational
• Hopeful

  At evening you and I took a walk you told me there was a gossiping going on that there are saying that you are gay and that I’m gossiping.

  6 lines, 2 comments, March 15. In Hope
• Look Around

  When I woke up this morning I thought of how I can make a difference.
  

  9 lines, 14 comments, March 11. In Thoughts

Guest Book

• stargazer-13 on March 9

  Hiya! Saw your comment on one of my poems. So I stoped to read some of yours and sign your guestbook. I noticed that your in the group for animal lovers.... So am I! Hope to hear from you and keep up with the good work!
• kareneisenlord on March 7

  for the record, here are the corrections that I gave you;
  
  "Here's the grammatical corrections; I took the liberty of fixing the sentence structure and flow a little. Also, there was something that I felt you were trying to say poetically ~ and I said it for you ~ "void of loneliness" Please put me down as a collaborator on the poem if you use my corrections... thanks
  
  I feel I don't belong
  in high school or church
  I feel this way and
  I feel awkward and alone
  
  I’m not alone, really
  Others feel this way
  They long to belong also
  From the void of loneliness
  
  When I am accepted
  I feel I belong, and happy
  But they don’t have to
  and I'm okay with that "
  
• kareneisenlord on March 7

  I'm glad that you liked my suggestions and changes for your poem, "I Feel I Don't Belong." I see that you edited your poem accordingly.
• Riverspirit on February 25

  Thank you for your kind words! I look forward to reading your work as well! All my best Riverspirit

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