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Tap on my window
Knock on my door
I wanna make you feel
Beautiful
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So I've basically been writting for about two years and I love it so much. It's one of the things that helps me get through the really tough days. I really want you guys to be completley honest about all my work. If you think it sucks, TELL ME!!! PLEASE!!! I want to be a poet so if I'm making mistakes now, I want to fix them so I can grow and get better. I know there are some very good poets on this site who are critical, so don't hesitate to say anything, I can take critizism. I hope you enjoy what you read here. I find some of my older work pathetic, but I guess as you move further along it just shows that I have grown. So browse around and please leave a comment, good or bad.
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</3 If I can only have you in my dreams, then I will sleep forever </3
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's so obvious,
why couldn't you see
That you can't go high flying
without a pair of high-flyer wings
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LOVE - n.
1)A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness.
2)A feeling of intense desire and attraction toward a person with whom one is disposed to make a pair; the emotion of sex and romance.
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If you ever need me...
AIM - XxBuBbLeS71389
E-mail - Caggydo@aol.com
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Check some of these guys out, they're amazing writters
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Tap on my window
Knock on my door
I wanna make you feel
Beautiful
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So I've basically been writting for about two years and I love it so much. It's one of the things that helps me get through the really tough days. I really want you guys to be completley honest about all my work. If you think it sucks, TELL ME!!! PLEASE!!! I want to be a poet so if I'm making mistakes now, I want to fix them so I can grow and get better. I know there are some very good poets on this site who are critical, so don't hesitate to say anything, I can take critizism. I hope you enjoy what you read here. I find some of my older work pathetic, but I guess as you move further along it just shows that I have grown. So browse around and please leave a comment, good or bad.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
</3 If I can only have you in my dreams, then I will sleep forever </3
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's so obvious,
why couldn't you see
That you can't go high flying
without a pair of high-flyer wings
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
LOVE - n.
1)A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness.
2)A feeling of intense desire and attraction toward a person with whom one is disposed to make a pair; the emotion of sex and romance.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you ever need me...
AIM - XxBuBbLeS71389
E-mail - Caggydo@aol.com
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Some Of The Best Poets I Know
This is in no specific order...
BeautifulContradiction
TheseFilthyTears
TheBlackVoid
LuNaR EcLiPsE
punkgrl8844
FallingDeep
jilted tongues
Child of Earth
PenguinsRUs
fallenangel3
GiveUPtheGhost
himichelle1989
Samantha Jo
Oasis
wanderingpoet
PainedAngel
Velvet Orchid
BrendaKellie
bradhadair
colorlessrose
Check some of these guys out, they're amazing writters
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- Last seen on May 13 2:53 PM. Member since September 24, 2003.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 286 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Let no one doubt, the greatness you hold within".
- I am a 18 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student at Penn State .
- Visit my homepage at psu.facebook.com/profile.php?id=506640948
- I have 286 comments, 2 contests, 97 poems, 1 story
My Poetry
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Fading Grass hangs its head Invisible imprints push it down and it struggles to stand upright once again14 lines, November 7, 2007. In Personal
My Stories
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Someone once told me that
Everyone has a story610 lines, 4 comments, March 1, 2004. In <200 lines, Other
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BeautifulContradiction on December 25, 2004I hope that you are having a wonderful and jolly holiday, my friend!
I await your next poem with anticipation
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PenguinsRUs on September 15, 2004I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PurpleHazzy23 on September 5, 2004Hey thanx...im glad u liked my poem! Good luck in writing poems.. hopes all goes well
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Jasmin Joy on July 15, 2004Do i know you haha carrie that i used to go to church with?
