Busho• Show poetry

• Last seen on Nov 11 5:41 PM 2007. Member since March 7, 2005.
• I'm a moonstone path poet for 521 comments.
• My mood is , and quote is "well how many wells does it take to make a river".
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• I am in the groups Haiku and Tanka
• I have 521 comments, 1 contest, 1 addline

My Poetry

• midnight rendezvous

  
  

  9 lines, 9 comments, August 31, 2006. In Haiku
• the pavement

  
  

  14 lines, 1 comment, August 28, 2006. In Haiku
• a breeze

  
  

  12 lines, 1 comment, August 28, 2006. In Haiku
• dole day

  
  

  2 lines, August 26, 2006. In Haiku

Guest Book

• Busho on April 29, 2006
  thank you jo it was a pleasure
• NoWayJo on April 28, 2006
  Busho...
  
  I really want to thank you and Myron and Maatkara all the help you offered me in not only this past Haiku Contest, but previous contests as well. It's a challenging form for sure, but one that intrigues me--The simplistic unique quality of which I find myself falling back to time and again, even for in the way of first drafts for my full-fledged imagery/metaphor/EVERYTHING poems. Outside of haiku-writings, it feels if I can get the image there to be plainly seen, all the poetic bells and whistles then fall in much easier.
  
  I'll never be an expert of any nature to this haiku form of poetry, much less any others, but I did want to personally extend my thanks to you and the others. It's rare that pure and honest critique of one's writing is offered here on AP, and one of the reasons I've grown quite cynical of this site. If ever you feel your unselfish and courteous "advice" for any poem, whether it be haiku or otherwise, be unappreciated, please feel free to send them a copy/paste of this message I'm passing to you and each of your co-judges. I wish there were only more like you.
  
  Thanks again, and catch you at the next contest!!!
  
  Jo
• Linda King CT-USA on February 27, 2006
  what poem are we talking about... i got so many i lose track... i can whip them up in seconds... you pick a topic - ill write you a poem.
• Busho on February 27, 2006
  hi linda an article is either an "A" or "the"

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