Im very new to writing. If fact up until a few months ago I dont think I had ever written a poem. I spend my days writing business reports, so I decided to start writing poetry to keep my mind fresh.
I am not one for rewriting my poems over and over. Normally what you see is my first and only draft.
If you are going to leave me a comment please just be honest. If you like it thats great and if you dont thats ok too, just please leave honest feedback and let me know why wither way.
Thanks,
Current favourite quotes:
Be what you would seem to be - or, if you'd like it put more simply - never imagine yourself not to be otherwise than what it might appear to others that what you were or might have been was not otherwise than what you had been would have appeared to them to be otherwise.
~.~
'The wicked go to hells, the good go to heavens and the pure neither live nor even die, but those hit on the head tend to fall unconscious.'
~.~
Why are you unhappy?
Because 99.9 per cent
Of everything you think,
And of everything you do,
Is for yourself -
And there isn't one.
~.~
I am not one for rewriting my poems over and over. Normally what you see is my first and only draft.
If you are going to leave me a comment please just be honest. If you like it thats great and if you dont thats ok too, just please leave honest feedback and let me know why wither way.
Thanks,
Current favourite quotes:
Be what you would seem to be - or, if you'd like it put more simply - never imagine yourself not to be otherwise than what it might appear to others that what you were or might have been was not otherwise than what you had been would have appeared to them to be otherwise.
~.~
'The wicked go to hells, the good go to heavens and the pure neither live nor even die, but those hit on the head tend to fall unconscious.'
~.~
Why are you unhappy?
Because 99.9 per cent
Of everything you think,
And of everything you do,
Is for yourself -
And there isn't one.
~.~
- Last seen on Feb 10 7:32 PM. Member since January 14, 2008.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 30 comments.
- I am a 26 year old guy (Australia)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Workshy layabout. AKA. Business Consultant .
- I have 30 comments, 15 poems
My Poetry
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The opposite of beauty is not ugly its sorrow.
22 lines, October 10, 2008 -
L Ron Hubbard was locked in his cupboard
Because his cellar was bare -
Dont worry I have done this hundreds of times.
10 lines, 1 comment, February 13, 2008 -
Be the one who is skilled in goodness
And know the path of peace
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kiwigirljacks : Hi..... on January 17, 2008Just thought I would wish you welcome to AP. I hope you enjoy your time here.. there are many wonderful poets, many different and diverse styles and thoughts.
Hope to read more of your work in the future!
