been studying seamus heaney at school
a bit like wordsworth (or so i've heard)
and thus have been writing poems ( for school ) similiar to his in some ways- mostly 'Bliss' and 'Neverland'.
'Wrong' and 'Left on 53rd Street' and 'Fate' are more my style of writing.
hope you enjoy, i know i did.
Bliss is, in summary, a story of the human experience of life. It explores the idea of the bliss-like values of ignorance and innocence, and that perhaps we regain elements of them in old age.
Neverland takes a different vein, and tells the story of a teenage boy growing up from the innocent childhood world he so cherished into an ugly adult reality. He tries to revisit the world of his childhood, but he has changed to much, and cannot go back.
And Wrong- well- you can take what you like away from that one.
Left on 53rd tells the story of a boy in a situation in which far too many are in today- poverty in the metropolitan slums of America.
Fate- An interesting poem, one that it's hard to say whether or not I actually believe what I wrote. But it does bring up some important points about human behaviour.
a bit like wordsworth (or so i've heard)
and thus have been writing poems ( for school ) similiar to his in some ways- mostly 'Bliss' and 'Neverland'.
'Wrong' and 'Left on 53rd Street' and 'Fate' are more my style of writing.
hope you enjoy, i know i did.
Bliss is, in summary, a story of the human experience of life. It explores the idea of the bliss-like values of ignorance and innocence, and that perhaps we regain elements of them in old age.
Neverland takes a different vein, and tells the story of a teenage boy growing up from the innocent childhood world he so cherished into an ugly adult reality. He tries to revisit the world of his childhood, but he has changed to much, and cannot go back.
And Wrong- well- you can take what you like away from that one.
Left on 53rd tells the story of a boy in a situation in which far too many are in today- poverty in the metropolitan slums of America.
Fate- An interesting poem, one that it's hard to say whether or not I actually believe what I wrote. But it does bring up some important points about human behaviour.
- Last seen on Oct 7 2:34 AM 2008. Member since November 15, 2006.
- I'm a amethyst understanding poet for 22 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "You could all just be figments of my imagination.....".
- I am a 17 year old guy (Australia)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- I have 22 comments, 16 poems
Poems I'm focused on
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11 lines, 2 comments, May 30, 2007
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Men don't Murder because they want to
Women don't nurse because they're asked to18 lines, 26 comments, March 17, 2007. In Personal, Life, Spiritual, Society, Lost in thought, My own style, Message -
To be lost inbetween childhood and adulthood, hell and earth.
In the Ghetto. -
Nobody stopped to help, they walked on by.
Silently hostile and disapproving.50 lines, 34 comments, November 23, 2006. In Sad, Other, Hope, Society, Nature, Contemporary, Life, Inspirational
My Poetry
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they kicked me out of the PTA for peeling and eating an apple11 lines, 1 comment, September 20, 2007
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Science can't tell you how to live. / Science can't tell you how to love. / And science can't tell you who to be. / Science can't tell you what to think. / Science can't tell you what to believe.23 lines, 5 comments, June 4, 2007. In Contemporary, Life, Other, Society, Thoughts, Humanity, Teenage thinking, Self
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StormyRobot on March 20, 2007Oh and by the way...
...I love, love, LOVE your motto: "You could all just be figments of my imagination."
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StormyRobot : A Million Thanks on March 20, 2007^_^ I can't even begin to thank you for commenting on my poems. Your comments are so sweet and I appreciate them so very, very much. It's the best feeling in the world to know that people are able to connect with my poems when they read them...honestly, what more could a poet ask for? =)
<3 Nicole -
SecretSafe : Welcome!!! on November 17, 2006Hey there!
I just checked out your work, nice stuff mate! and that led me to checkin out your author page, and low and behold, you're new!!!
Welcome!!!
Hope you enjoy AP!
xxx NSH
