My style is rhythm and rhyme and I get most of my inspiration from things that I have been through in my life. Sometimes my work is a bit difficult to read I have been told, because of the spontaneous manner in which I write and I would say emotions are a big part of that. I along with other people, think that I am a nice, mature and a somewhat theological guy. I like debate and enjoy learning about most things. I don't really have a favorite author or poem because there are so many good ones out there I couldn't pick just one as a favorite. I'm not that great as a speller but I have had people like my work regardless. I hope you enjoy what you read not just on this page but on this website and beyond to the depths of the realm of poetry.
- Last seen on Sep 17 12:28 AM 2008. Member since July 23, 2003.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 363 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "The Dream of Death Is A Dream For The Weak".
- I am a 22 year old guy (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Good Guy Fighting For Others (USN).
- I have 363 comments, 153 poems, 1 story
My Poetry
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It is not by lies that we do not have truth, nor by truth do we have lies
The truth behind it all is within a persons disguise.13 lines, August 5, 2008 -
The swords of our tongs have become sharpened by pain
You are the cold stone for my blades edge to be worked14 lines, 1 comment, March 16, 2008. In Thoughts -
Do not fret or look down for I will be around.
I will be in your thoughts from now till I get back.13 lines, 1 comment, February 8, 2008 -
I remember the days when I said I was in love Singing songs on the radio that made me think of you.20 lines, February 8, 2008
My Stories
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318 lines, January 25, 2005. In <200 lines, Adult
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KermitsWoman on May 25, 2005Thank you for such kind words... it means a lot to me... your comments on my two poems where very nice.... well thanks.... love ya
~~Sara~~
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wayward cry on May 9, 2005Hey, how are you? I haven't heard from you in a while...I hope you are well...I would hate having to do some random mind meld....and violate your thought life...Girls are not evil!...there are some very nice ones that exist...Florida people are strange...don't mind me...I'm just rambling...Mwahahaha...I might be confusing you with another person...but I'm like 80% certain that I'm not confusing your identity...*sigh*...I'm making a documentary...on my final project...which will be like a 9 minute animation...well...laters...
Grace -
DazedAndConfused88 on April 7, 2005a 0-year-old boy? Wow. That's new!
I'm a huge fan of rythm and rhyme as well.
Keep up the good work! -
Thanks so much for your comment, it was brilliant.
"If I find the one that truly does love me then I know she will see the beauty thats hidden beneath the rocks and stone of my broken hearts cold and empty throne." - That was so beautifully said, I completely agree. I used to be the same, I would have done anything for a guy to like me. It's hard to learn to be yourself, not to change for anyone. Thanks again
~ Laura xxx
