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BrokenLockBox

  • Last seen on May 19 2:24 PM. Member since April 24, 2006.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 148 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "You can't define me.".
  • I am a 22 year old woman from Kansas (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm doing something else..
  • Visit my homepage at indecisivecorkscrew@yahoo.com
  • I have 148 comments, 37 poems

Poems I'm focused on

  • Enlighten me, my thoughts
    I break down in equation.
    87 lines, 9 comments, April 2, 2007

My Poetry

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  • AltruisticSociopath : You need a better message in your guestbook on December 29, 2006
    I noticed the only comment in your guestbook consists of clapping smiley faces and flowers, if memory serves. Smiley faces and flowers are excellent, but I thought some words might look good. I've always loved your poems. There is a different feel to reading them online and hearing you read them while sitting in your living room. The phrases that stick out when you're reading them aloud always jump at me again when I'm reading them on a computer. I think my favorite thing about your poems is the way the words seem to belong exactly where they are. There is a natural rhythm to them that is lacking in most poems. A lot of your endings tie together well, and give depression a more enthusiastic energy. (Kind of like some songs.)
    -Gaya

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