My name's Edward. I am in college. I sometimes write shitty poetry.
Any critiques or comments are welcome. The former, especially.
You ought to read:
n.e.o.n
BarbedWireButterfly
nephlim
Aesthete
Any critiques or comments are welcome. The former, especially.
You ought to read:
n.e.o.n
BarbedWireButterfly
nephlim
Aesthete
- Last seen right now. Member since August 13, 2007.
- I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 77 comments.
- I am a 19 year old guy from South Dakota (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm not doing anything of worth or merit..
- I am in the groups Diseased Minds, Get Read, XxAcidicBruisesAndShatteredSoulsxX
- I have 77 comments, 13 poems
My Poetry
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This shining soldier,
a gleaming, young knight;26 lines, 2 comments, November 7 -
Guest Book
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BarbedWireButterfly on August 16, 2007wow, thanks. i really appreciate that. ill read yours sometime. not a the moment. two assignments. lol
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BarbedWireButterfly on August 14, 2007hey thanks for joining my group darker side of angst, cya around
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wbiro on August 13, 2007Hey, I believe you're rich and have a lot of friends and live in an exciting town...!
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voodoo ink on August 13, 2007By the way you have written your first offering to the gods of poetry, I can only wait for more poems from you...Welcome to this site and if you ever need to talk don't hesitate to do so with me...Despite the controversy, I am approachable and user friendly...there's an idea for a poem "User Friendly"...damn, I should eat chili late at night more often, but then again, the paint is chipping from the walls already...(whewwww)
...just acting goofy, but that's the kinda peeps they let roam in here, although there is an occasional tight ass on here, but they're harmless, just throw them a freakin' bone or two...
Oh yeah, glad to have you on board, poet...
(actual self-portrait)
~jeremi
