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I am a 45 year old male from the UK, i write songs under the name of AeaeA

I can be found mostly in the chat Room.

Hates: Profane Language, bullying, cliques and salacious behaviour  


I have never been a great reader, but always been envious of those who can spend hours with their face and mind in a book, to be able to be taken to another place by anothers words is to me something that has always been something i have hoped i could experience, i think i have read 2 and a half books in my life, a mickey spillane bok( the title evades me but it was a mike hammer novel), Misery by stephen king and half of the hobbit( i am determined to finish that one day), oh and the lion the witch and the wardrobe, but that was so long ago i would have to re-read it to remember it all.
Being part of AP has and continues to be an amazing experience, and once in a while something happens that takes you completely by suprise, today has been one of those moments, Envelope, a member here sent me a link to something he is working on, so as i always do, i visted the link, and it was to what i can only describe as something that i have hoped for, for a long time, a Story that wouldn't let me stop reading until the end, now in all the time i have been on here , i have seen some amazing poetry, and spoken to some amazing people, but in all that time i have never read any of the stories that people write(golden rule No.1: if its over 70 lines run for the hills), but "2 am" just blew me away, its vivid, engrossing, harsh but has a morbidity that you cant help but stay with, it has so much despair and yet its got something about it that wont let you go untill its finished with you, and after you feel like you need a shower, to me this short snippet of the world and characters Coop has begun to breath life into is something that will devour you, spit you out and leave you wanting more, i would suggest anyone reading this, goes over and reads it, it may not be to everyones liking but if you enjoyed "Sin City" the movie (havent read the book(surprise surprise)) you will certainly enjoy this

Link to 2 am
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5125855

  • Last seen 2 hours ago. Member since December 6, 2005.
  • I'm a obsidian idea poet for 579 comments.
  • I am a 45 year old guy (Great Britain)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Hotel Receptionist.
  • Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/aeaeasmusic
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  • I have 579 comments, 4 contests, 36 poems

Poems I'm focused on

  • Gone(unfinished)
    Verse 1
    we could have gone so far
    23 lines, 4 comments, March 19
  • your shadow(unfinished)
    never felt the sunlight on my face
    i'll be gone one day without a trace
    48 lines, 4 comments, March 11
  • theres a reason(Unfin)
    baby there's a reason
    that i stay around with you
    13 lines, 4 comments, March 10
  • i need me
    im walking away from the best thing in my life
    before the day turns into night
    29 lines, 4 comments, March 10
  • Rise Against(unfin)
    Chorus
    we're here, we're not gonna go Away
    22 lines, 1 comment, March 10

My Poetry

1 - 4 of 36   Show all • Search
  • The Chalk Outline
    Verse 1
    in the hood or the Ghetto or the projects dont matter
    35 lines, October 30
  • another bad habit
    Verse 1
    I look at the clock, it`s 4am
    34 lines, October 27
  • Another
    another child
    waiting to die
    18 lines, October 27
  • Serenity Untouched.....Chapter 4
    the fresh sea breeze gently moved her hair
    she smiled and felt safe with her father standing there
    39 lines, 1 comment, October 26

Guest Book

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  • funnybone on September 23
    hiya born, your scouse freind here, how u doin ?
  • Sentimentalpoet on August 29
    uncle mike what about ur song vocals?

    ur mental
    Mini
  • Sentimentalpoet on August 26
    uncle mike is back yuppy

    ur mental
    mini
  • Sentimentalpoet on August 26
    uncle mike is back yuppy

    ur mental
    mini

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