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I go to school, as you all probably know, in my free time, I like to write, poetry, stories and lyrics. I also like to do music. I like: going swimming, go - karting, football, tennis, bowling, and going to the cinema. Not forgetting I like to sing.

I wrote a poem or two,
to start with,
my mind started, boggling,
so I wrote more and more,
to this day,
I sit here writing,
I get good comments,
I get bad,
but that is the art of all poetry.
I like to write poems and stories,
a hundred percent mine.
My poems are not to everyone’s delight,
but not everyone is the same,
I feel I want to write forever,
I feel I want to write till my very dying hour.

Hi everyone, I like good or bad comments,
I appreciate, it,
if you are honest and say the truth,
so I can learn, from my mistakes.
Thank you all very much.


Hi I hope you enjoy,
reading my poems and stories,
as I want to learn,
and build my skills,
so please be honest,
please give me something to work on,
although I like them to be nice,
however I know they always can not be.
So please say what you truly mean,
and feel about my poems and stories.
I would be happy,
to have ideas,
what to work on next,
like a topic, e.g. mice,
as when I have wrote so many poems and stories,
I tend to lose ideas.

(If you have any ideas, please leave them in your comment.)

Blue as the sky,
Light of my life,
Unbelievable love,
Emotions felt strong,
Magic moments we have,
Over the horizon we seek,
One day we'll find what we are looking for,
Never giving up on ideas

I wrote this one myself.


Blue moon will be out soon,
Lighting your path and your sky very soon,
Under, the moon I lay gazing, at the shining stars too,
Ever growing in the nights sky I’ll show you,
Mysterious creatures you can see,
Oh! Let it be between you and me!
Oh let it survive I plea.
Never ending it will be!

I also wrote this one myself.

Since I have been on this site I have made loads of friends;

Creativity22 (A relative)

Sewasham

DistantWorld

Spoons

laurapetersen

pinkwhite

AngelFromHeaven

Aevil - Faerie

Frogger

LGAlexander

stellar7629

Leestar (A relative)

Flame Dancer 89

Essence 13

tkn2874

Rene4Ever

jessica224

Shadowygirl

Spankygurly6778

IndigoPhenix

lilmissme

sara133

forever me

Scooby - Doo 2 (A relative)

Fishinglad

Night Star (My brother)

Uncle Space

AngelEyes711

Silent - Tear04

dragon master

Little

catz

quietly burning

muddymae123

Dawnknight

hhslady06

mommabug

muffincontrol

Blackevil

Veronica S

aiceybaby6

PoemsOfALiftime  

Lady Sangria

MissHapps

Lyricisit sara

littleladylaura

Mozaic

Sandygram

Sunbeam

Tide

Poem Prince

plus lots, lots more......

Brilliant
Lovely
Under
Estimated
Musical
On the moon
Of course a dreamer
Naughty but nice

My relative creativity22 wrote this for me, well done, thank you ever so much!  

Blessed with a kind heart
Loves writing his art
Uplifting when writing
Each line so inviting
Makes everyone feel better
Over each written letter
On any given day
Nice things he will say

My friend Sewasham wrote this for me it is fantastic, thank you ever so much!  

Blessed with such a kind sweet heart,
Loves to write his art,
Under estimated at times,
Endorsing with his mimes,
Much potential he may carry,
Ongoing, happy as Larry,
Obnoxious never may seem,
Normal as can be, always his smiles may beam.

My brother Night Star wrote this one for me! Thanks a lot, it is fantastic, keep up the great work!

Blue Moon is a buddy of mine
I think that his writing's quite fine
Though only eleven
His words come from heaven
And his poetry really does shine

Sewasham thank you ever so much, it is much appreciated!

*THIS YOUNG BOY LOVES ASTRONOMY,
HE STUDIES THE SOLAR SYSTEM NIGHT AND DAY,
HE STUDIES THE SOLAR SYSTEM IN EVERY WAY,
JUST AS I DID AS A LITTLE BOY,
I STILL STUDY THEM TODAY,
THIS YOUNG BOY LOVES ASTRONOMY,
AS MUCH AS I STILL DO.
*
My friend Dragon Master wrote this for me. Thank you ever so  much it is most appreciated. This is very well done!

This boy is talented,
More than his cousins maybe,
He may be more talented than me,
You just wait and see,

He never knows what the future might hold,
For all I know he is very bold,
Some day for all you know,
He might come out and say...

"-BEHOLD-"

My friend Dragonmaster also wrote this one for me. Thank you ever so much, it is really appreciated I really enjoyed it.


You should check out their work. As most of their poems are fantastic!

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: x
: - L
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: >
. : )  or  roll (in stars)
b - )
: f
 kiss (in stars)
[star] : )
: D
o _ O
: @ )
: ( | )
: %
alien (in stars)
bye (in stars)
giggle(in stars)
coffee (in stars)
angel (in stars)
hug (in stars)
help (in stars)
blush (in stars)


These are just a few I know, the basics.

If anyone was wondering I born on the 6th of June 1992



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  • I have 2,909 comments, 2 contests, 2 addlines, 350 poems, 5 stories

My Poetry

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My Stories

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  • The sun was setting, the moon was rising, soon it would be time, for the mystical creatures to come out to play, what will I see, would be unknown as each and e
    98 lines, 10 comments, May 16, 2004. In <200 lines, Fantasy, Other, Spiritual
  • Memory:
    It was the 11th May 1969 I remember it all as clear as day it was my worst nightmare come true.
    734 lines, 2 comments, February 21, 2004. In <200 lines, Other
  • Tom was being bullied because he had a different culture, he had to do what they said, when they said; or else he would be beaten to the ground. His confidence and his work, wa
    569 lines, 2 comments, February 21, 2004. In <200 lines, Other

Guest Book

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  • Sky Prince Ireland on March 22
    hey aron! Stopping by to say hello again.
    Hope you're well, buddy.
    Brian
    (formerly Poem Prince)
  • Richard Ashcroft : Random on May 7, 2008
    Hey this may be random and I came across your page and you have the same birthday as me! Only I was born in 1993 lol. Well.. uh... toodles.
  • Little Eagle : From tkn2874 now Little Feather on September 6, 2007
    Hey Blue Moon, you know you were the first person to ever sign my guestbook and I was just looking at them and saw your name so I had to come and sign your guestbook. I have been through several name changes and seeing that you had me as tkn2874 brought back a lot of memories

    So just a hey from an old friend

    God Bless
    Tammy
  • Sky Prince Ireland on August 25, 2006
    Hey Aron, remember me? Formerly Poem Prince, now I'm Sky Prince Ireland. Hope you're okay and all's well. I was thinking about you for the first time in a long time so I thought I'd drop in to say hi and give you some big s. Love ya lots, buddy. Take care.
    Brian

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