Last updated: January, 14th, 2009
A notice:
I am no longer using this account as a main place for my poetry. I have a deviantart where I post most of it, so please ask and I'll give the link. There will be, however, some things that are here and not there. I'm a fan of this community when it comes to poetry.
A lot of my poetry is of a darker shade of light, and hiding behind the smokescreen is what I excel at. Metaphors, and rhyming are my fortes, and meter is my piano.
If you choose to comment on my work, I'll try and return the favor. Please beware that I'm not looking for simple "You're great"s or "You suck"s, but constructive criticism (unless directly not asked for) and when I comment I will, typically, criticize the work, not just give my opinion on it.
The main point of this account is to read wonderful poetry and prose, and to compete in contests, and maybe a short story or two will show up.
A notice:
I am no longer using this account as a main place for my poetry. I have a deviantart where I post most of it, so please ask and I'll give the link. There will be, however, some things that are here and not there. I'm a fan of this community when it comes to poetry.
A lot of my poetry is of a darker shade of light, and hiding behind the smokescreen is what I excel at. Metaphors, and rhyming are my fortes, and meter is my piano.
If you choose to comment on my work, I'll try and return the favor. Please beware that I'm not looking for simple "You're great"s or "You suck"s, but constructive criticism (unless directly not asked for) and when I comment I will, typically, criticize the work, not just give my opinion on it.
The main point of this account is to read wonderful poetry and prose, and to compete in contests, and maybe a short story or two will show up.
- Last seen on Oct 22 6:51 PM. Member since March 28, 2005.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 330 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I once fell out of your mind, let me back in?".
- I am a 21 year old guy from Ohio (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- I have 330 comments, 2 contests, 7 columns, 50 poems, 5 stories
Poems I'm focused on
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16 lines, 5 comments, April 13, 2007
My Poetry
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39 lines, January 15. In Adult
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My Stories
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641 lines, September 7, 2007. In 600-2000 words
Guest Book
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Umi Juvariel on March 3, 2006See, that's what I thought, but I had to make sure. Arigatou.
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BloodtippedWings on March 2, 2006I thought we cleared it a long time ago.
My books will have "my version" of Umi, and yours will have your version of Aravain, right? -
Umi Juvariel on March 1, 2006I know you hate me, but I need to talk to you about the Aravain/Umi book thing. Sort of important. If you could just possibly get back to me on that, I'm sure we can do this diplomatically.
p.s
think you're in enough clubs, lol
