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I'm a writer living in Perth, studying in Melbourne, Australia. I have been inspired into poetry through my love of life. I'm still learning and i dont think my style is that limited, though i tend to write about topics i find profound in life. I'm more of a realist then an artist and that tends to show in my poems which lack vivid imagery and symbolism.

Structure is something i find important and i try make my poems logical. Comment away! I'd love to hear ur opinion and be very willing to comment (with my limited knowledge) on your work.

Thanks

Phil

icq: 9318673
email/msn: vexed_blaze@hotmail.com

  • Last seen on Jun 3 4:31 AM 2006. Member since October 16, 2001.
  • I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 329 comments.
  • I am a 18 year old guy (Australia)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a Student.
  • I have 329 comments, 27 poems, 3 stories

My Poetry

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  • Shattered Memory
    Your picture sits on my shelf framed in gold,
    But your image lies in ruin in my heart,
    17 lines, 1 comment, May 26, 2003. In Love
  • Goodbye to You
    Your picture sits on my shelf framed in gold,
    But your image lies in ruin in my heart,
    17 lines, 12 comments, April 10, 2003. In Love
  • My Angel
    Since our birth,
    I wonder if it was our fate.
    38 lines, November 6, 2002
  • Hospital Ward
    I lie awake in bed and I can feel his presence,
    I don’t remember his name nor his face,
    59 lines, 2 comments, October 25, 2002

My Stories

  • Visiting Hours
    “But that’s not fair!! Why does Steph get to have a farewell party and I don’t?”
    “Paul you don’t understand, you had a birthday party yesterday!”
    1557 lines, 8 comments, October 8, 2002. In <200 lines, Depression
  • Howling Winds, Fading Stars (Shorter Version)
    I arrived at my new school today. I was physically hours away from home, yet vivid memories rotated like slides through my mind. They reminded me that mentally I was still trap
    1819 lines, 6 comments, August 23, 2002. In <200 lines, Inspirational
  • Howling Winds, Fading Stars
    I took a deep breath tasting the fresh air. I looked around and for the first time I noticed the serenity of my surroundings. The peacefulness. I listened to the birds as they
    2913 lines, 3 comments, June 20, 2002. In <200 lines, Inspirational

Guest Book

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  • Calizcrazygurl on August 8, 2004
    ello puppet
  • swtchic42000 on April 30, 2003
    Hey.I like your writting.Its very descriptive.The best i'd have to say would be your poem the one.
  • myrataal on December 31, 2002
    always trust the heart
    whilst soothing ... ripping apart
    it's shadow holds Sun

    Love shall bloom its timeless Rose
    End cannot loose Beginning

    myra
    01.01.2003
  • Eventide on August 10, 2002
    I can't believe you read all my poems. I'm truly flattered. You do some fantastic work yourself. I enjoy reading it.
    ~*~Ashley~*~

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