"All the universe is full of the lives of perfect creatures."
- Constantine Tsiolkovski
"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of a joy you must have somebody to divide it with."
- Mark Twain
ความวิปโยคสุดพรรณนาและความยิ่งใหญ่คือชาตากรรมแห่งความรักของฉันที่มีต่อเธอ - I have no idea what this means, but it looks pretty.
"Should Heaven send me any son,
I hope he's not like Tennyson.
I'd rather have him play a fiddle
Than rise and bow and speak an idyll."
- Dorothy Parker
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I'm currently working on building my dysfunctional AP family.
Here is my brand new peeping tom, glue-sniffing little brother, straight home from the (mental) hospital:
http://allpoetry.com/She%20Has%20My%20Heart
Actually, he's a very well-adjusted, extremely talented young man and his poetry and personality are perpetually impressive. If you haven't seen his work or had a chat with him yet, you are truly missing out. Check him out like a Walmart express lane employee, on the double and with a look that screams "I hate humanity, but I love 16 year old British schoolboys."
My speed freak Tourette's step-sister!
http://allpoetry.com/Slinky-milinky
She's seriously got some of the most unique, edgy, bleeding awesome poetry I've ever laid eyes on! Clever girl. Oh, and she has rockin' good taste. What more could you ask for? I'm sure she's got that, too.
My incestuous cousin with webbed feet:
http://allpoetry.com/BurmaShave
This was the first person I befriended here and I'm lucky I did. His poetry is, in a word, phenomenal. Besides that, he's a cool, intelligent cat with a great sense of humor. If you want inspiration to be a better writer, his page is the place to go.
- Constantine Tsiolkovski
"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of a joy you must have somebody to divide it with."
- Mark Twain
ความวิปโยคสุดพรรณนาและความยิ่งใหญ่คือชาตากรรมแห่งความรักของฉันที่มีต่อเธอ - I have no idea what this means, but it looks pretty.
"Should Heaven send me any son,
I hope he's not like Tennyson.
I'd rather have him play a fiddle
Than rise and bow and speak an idyll."
- Dorothy Parker
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I'm currently working on building my dysfunctional AP family.
Here is my brand new peeping tom, glue-sniffing little brother, straight home from the (mental) hospital:
http://allpoetry.com/She%20Has%20My%20Heart
Actually, he's a very well-adjusted, extremely talented young man and his poetry and personality are perpetually impressive. If you haven't seen his work or had a chat with him yet, you are truly missing out. Check him out like a Walmart express lane employee, on the double and with a look that screams "I hate humanity, but I love 16 year old British schoolboys."
My speed freak Tourette's step-sister!
http://allpoetry.com/Slinky-milinky
She's seriously got some of the most unique, edgy, bleeding awesome poetry I've ever laid eyes on! Clever girl. Oh, and she has rockin' good taste. What more could you ask for? I'm sure she's got that, too.
My incestuous cousin with webbed feet:
http://allpoetry.com/BurmaShave
This was the first person I befriended here and I'm lucky I did. His poetry is, in a word, phenomenal. Besides that, he's a cool, intelligent cat with a great sense of humor. If you want inspiration to be a better writer, his page is the place to go.
- Last seen 5 hours ago. Member since October 11, 2007.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 386 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "I don't have a clue about life. Let's listen to some music.".
- I am a 22 year old girl from Pennsylvania (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a dead cowgirl in a haunted ghost town. (No, seriously).
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/bermudahighway






































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Clockwork on October 27Thanks for the comment on my poem.
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drumdog79 on August 20welcome to my favorites list.
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drumdog79 on August 20Oh yeah, about alliteration, I'm a huge fan of it. I believe it was in the intro to Robert Pinsky's translation of 'The Inferno' where he states how hard it is to keep thinkgs rhyming when translating from italian to english so he adopted a wide deffinition of rhyming which included alliteration. But I was a fan before reading that.
About my suggestion in Tomb of the Ultimatley Unknown; I think you used "my" twice in that line and changing it just made it flow a lil better and feel less repetitious. Feel free not to use my input (obviously), I am far from a perfect poet.
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Death of the Author on July 10Excellent choice of lyrics, if I may say so
