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- Last seen on Apr 26 1:51 PM. Member since April 26, 2007.
- I'm a moonstone path poet for 475 comments.
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, and quote is "tralalalalala". - I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm uh going to school, breathing, thinking. and writing my totally awesometastic book which will hopefully get published one day.
- I am in the groups Anime Lovers, Group Of Amazing Thinkers, The Loaf That Loves You
- I have 475 comments, 11 contests, 71 poems, 3 stories
Poems I'm focused on
My Poetry
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The poor mistreated doll lay tattered on the floor
The young girl had grown up and had left the house12 lines, 5 comments, December 21, 2008 -
18 lines, 6 comments, September 4, 2008
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15 lines, 6 comments, August 23, 2008
My Stories
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July 19, 1972 / Well he's finally come to his senses. We can go on the flight. Yea it's going to be hectic, but I know we're going to make it. My father is at his second lesson at the moment. I'll be back later. /92 lines, 1 comment, June 7, 2007. In <600 words
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August 10, 1972 / Sorry I didn't right yesterday. I was busy helping my dad with the balloon. Not much happened though. Today we were almost blown off coarse due to the strong winds in Michigan. If fact I almost fel260 lines, 1 comment, June 7, 2007. In <600 words
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A Dare-Devil and Her Father / A story of a dare devil and her father and the her tragic death / Layla's diary / May 28,1972 / Well today was the worst day I have ever lived t311 lines, 3 comments, June 6, 2007. In <600 words
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Chocolate Chip on March 27ruth!!! D8 i miss talking to you! and your writes!!!
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BonnieQ on December 18, 2008True writers never quit, dear one; they just keep writing and learning and editing and writing some more. And, most writers indulge in all the forms of writing, which includes poetry. Doesn't mean you start out, necessarily, as a poet; but, you can grow as a poet by reading the best poets of old and those at this website: learn what makes their poetry great and be willing to take a lot of constructive criticism, because that's how we learn.
Editing, careful editing, is the mark of a great writer; one who is willing to constantly improve and takes advice well. So, rather than leave A/P-- which as you say is that you will continue to read works here but will not be posting anything-- stay, but henceforth be willing to learn from the best.
I recommend that you read A/P poets such as: emvyar, thelordreigns (Joanne, a high school teacher). . . well, in short, go to my A/P page and look at my favorites list: the best are listed there.
And, as a published author and a former publisher's editor, I would be willing to take you under my wing and I feel certain that thelordreigns would, too.
Keep writing, IF you really love to write.
Much love in Christ, BonnieQ
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Painted Nails on October 9, 2008Hello Ruth,
Well, you probably dont know me, but I want to change that! See, I am ur sister!! (Dun dun dun... dramatic background music)... hehe .... well I am ur sister according to the contest u entered! My name is Sydney and I look forward to chatting with you!!
Love your sister,
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God is my reality on October 8, 2008Dropping by to show ur page so love so here it is...........LLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Hehe. Sry I'm bored. Can't wait to read some new stuff!
