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Bads

Hey all. I personally like deep kinda poem. The kind that when u read you instantly knows that it is written frm the deepest corner of the soul. And i hope i ll b able to write like that too!!!so check em out and tell me. Any line that u need extra understanding you can and i ll b happy to explain.
Rock on!!!
I write most poem about my self in a third person view...and some are about my friends....

  • Member since July 25, 2005.
  • I'm a supertopaz delight poet for 85 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "My soul bleeds".
  • I am a 19 year old guy (United States)
  • I am in the groups All Metal
  • I have 85 comments, 16 poems, 5 stories

My Poetry

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  • The mule, the fuel and, the dew
    There once lived a maiden with glowing eyes,
    Deep within her lived a golden fairy flies,
    17 lines, November 7, 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Dark
  • Patience
    thou are superior,
    in every single way,
    10 lines, February 1, 2007. In Life, Hope, Dark
  • Land of fire
    Thou art welcome to the land of fire,
    Where all that we burns are but desire,
    27 lines, 1 comment, September 11, 2006. In Hope
  • Frozen day
    Lo! The sky ascends with its charming light,
    They day tries to make its ordinary flight,
    97 lines, 3 comments, December 10, 2005. In Love

My Stories

1 - 3 of 5   Show all at storywrite

Guest Book

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  • Bads on March 9, 2006
    Hey yea, thnx for a comment...m sure u r pretty cool too...n lets chat sometimes
  • Nightmare-Anatomy on March 7, 2006
    hey. you sound cool. im me back sometime. we can chat it up. yay.
    [[ you wrie such pretty words. ]]
    {{ AutumN }}
  • psycotic on October 3, 2005
    Wow awsome rights, and if you like dark poetry i am sure that you would like most of my poetry so if ya want look me up.
  • AzureBlue on August 10, 2005
    IF YOU LOVE METAL MUSIC,
    JOIN THE HARDEST ROCKING GROUP ON AP,
    \m/ ALL METAL!!!
    JUST CLICK ON allpoetry.com/Poem/828761
    TO FIND OUT HOW TO JOIN!!!
    I hope you will bang heads with us!


    Lorena

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