Love....(written 2004)
Love... something my lips once said
I find love to be too young for me
A child it loves to play with the soul
My soul is too grown for this
for this thing called love....
but what must I do in this sleep
when one comes
should I wait, wait for it to leave
and then it be the real love I left?...
that I left...
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Aurielle's poem held a great amount grace, passion, flow, voice, imagery, and unique metaphors. She always ends her poem with a sigh of thoughts... Setted within the century of shakesphear, where such legend poets had grazed, she writes classical. Upon her windowsill, she lays her hair tis gentle and writes. She writes of love, peace, hate and stress. She indeed speaks from her soul and mind which many can not. Such words she creates upon lines as Romeo somwhere listens... She is influenced by Shakeshpear,(same birth) Elizabth Barring, Emily Dickson, Egdar Allen Poe, and Robert. Catch her daydreaming upon her pen as it paints such beauty
and though she is only 18...
"I love to read oldpoetry because that is where poetry because as we know and I also like to paint influenced by classical paintings...
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CONGRATS ON MY PUBLISHED BOOK CALLED "THE SWEETEST VOICE." ORDER UT AT WORDCLAY.COM JUST SEARCH THE TITLE "THE SWEETEST VOICE." by Aurielle
I am studying buiness to become a designer
I am going to become an artist/writer
I am going to minor in writing/art to become a journalist
I also took class in modeling/acting at john casablanca
which I have an desired for beauty since I was young
I am going to get a degree in fashion designer/model
and studying in france, paris
You can reach me on myspace.com/queenauri or facebook at facebook.com/aurielle
for my future designs and they will be classic elegant and yummy
I am so excited for that!!!
for more info of my writing can be gathered at mygorgeouswork.ning.com/Aurielle
and my book is available at wordclay.com
- Last seen 4 hours ago. Member since July 25, 2005.
- I'm a surreal skittle poet for 3,136 comments.
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, and quote is "Perhaps to be not loved is better then being inlove ". - I am a 18 year old girl from Florida (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm Aspring fashion designer, Abstract artist, freelance writer.
- Visit my homepage at mygorgeouswork.ning.com/queenauri
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(73)- I am in the groups Erotic Desires, Girl Interrupted, Girls Talk Boys Talk by Aurielle NEW, Place of Prayer, Poetry Circus, Rappers Freestyles Battles and Lyricis, TFTD and WFTD, The Loaf That Loves You, The Score, Theres Something Sexy About the Rain, Vocabulary Word of the Day, Warriors For Christ
- I have 3,136 comments, 18 contests, 1 addline, 2 columns, 291 poems, 10 stories, 2 philosophies, 3 journals
Poems I'm focused on
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19 lines, 6 comments, November 17, 2007
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24 lines, 24 comments, September 2, 2007. In Thoughts
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29 lines, 14 comments, June 18, 2007
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My Poetry
My Stories
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The morning crawled into my eyes like a stranger seeped into the house12479 lines, March 19. In 2000-5000 words
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The air sounded speechless as the wind combined of many rays combed across her sweet eyelash. The stars dressed in yellow wet across the sky drips of shine were revealed…the beauties had created a masterpiece within her eyes.644 lines, December 31, 2008. In 600-2000 words
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As a sudden she was under a world of fine colors that swayed in red. Their the note stood in the middle as like a poemm. Their were many creatures around her walking hearts and fruits that hang like sunshine on sky. She walke431 lines, July 7, 2008. In <600 words, Love
My other items
- Column: The beauty of you is the term "Beautiful" at allpoetry
My journal entries
Guest Book
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csmmoms2 on August 19I remember reading the first of you and it cut me to the bone. It was like my words my story. "She's so young can't even have been there yet." But the words were stairin' me in the face. Really stunning!
Here's Shakespear act 1 scene V it's my fav from Romeo and Juliet.
Let hands do what lips do
ROMEO
[To JULIET] If I profane with my unworthiest hand
This holy shrine, the gentle fine is this:
My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand
To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss.
JULIET
Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much,
Which mannerly devotion shows in this;
For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.
ROMEO
Have not saints lips, and holy palmers too?
JULIET
Ay, pilgrim, lips that they must use in prayer.
ROMEO
O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do;
They pray, grant thou, lest faith turn to despair.
JULIET
Saints do not move, though grant for prayers' sake.
ROMEO
Then move not, while my prayer's effect I take.
Thus from my lips, by yours, my sin is purged.
JULIET
Then have my lips the sin that they have took.
ROMEO
Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again.
JULIET
You kiss by the book.
-c
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Isaac Bailey : Mother Earth ! on June 7
Black cherry moon so heavenly bright
It's no wonder you're a star your presence
So vibrant so amazingly sculpted
A master piece of untold wonders
With un-foretold powers that lay dormant
To the unforeseen eye if ever a glimpse of your treasures
were embraced there would be an overwhelming
Sense of self worth within but with the gifts you so
naturally Inherit but almost always taken for granted
You are that very fine balance in life from which
Human nature seems to thrive upon to nurture the
Mind body & soul this is a tribute to my Nubian
black woman I applaud never asking for to much in return
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Aurielle on April 27"Leaping away from my mistakes has propelled me forward. It has great force behind it. It makes for great storytelling. "
- Holly Near
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Aurielle : GORGEOUS WORK on April 27
Nominated poetic book of the year is "The Sweetest Voice. If you love romeo juliet love poems. You can order it at the bookstore at wordclay.com search for the title "The Sweetest Voice!" Get your copy now before the price goes up!!!
