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Dead Poetic
The Dream Club Murders

So after all, you needed more than a death-threat fall.
You needed more, and I let you fall.
Into the coffin with your floor-dropped jaw.
And I remember you aspiration, your dream to fit in.
But it's gone, and they're here.
So let's kill these felons now.

But I remember you, you'll go, you'll find a way back home.
But I remember you, when you stand there,
You stand with your eyes closed.

And I feel, tonight, that I let you die.
But you could have lived forever, it took smiles to keep you alive.
But heroes die, and so did mine.
But you go, and I stay, will it keep you at peace now.

But I remember you, you'll go, you'll find a way back home.
But I remember you, when you stand there,
You stand with your eyes closed.

And I'll dig you out, and I'll sit you up.
For the fools to find you, the fools breathe into you.

So sleep child no one can touch you now.
No one can hurt you now. Not here. Anymore.


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AIM: apoc303
website: http://xanga.com/AstralBlueEyes

  • Last seen on Jan 11 9:57 AM 2006. Member since January 22, 2004.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 96 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "As two broken mirrors become one...".
  • I am a 18 year old guy (USA)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a High School Student.
  • Visit my homepage at apoc303.deviantart.com
  • I have 96 comments, 26 poems, 1 story

My Poetry

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My Stories

  • There was a man who lived in the woods all by himself in a cold and dark cabin. This life of solitude he chose because of the pain and suffering that was reigned down upon him
    249 lines, 5 comments, March 24, 2004. In <200 lines, Other

Guest Book

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  • SuchPrettyWords on January 7, 2006
    i miss you...its been forever....i have alot to talk to you about....catch up..how are you? i got engaged (not to andrew that effer)...anyways call me sometime....757-679-1723
  • Blood Talon on September 23, 2004
    Hullo Alex. *hugs* And to answer the question that you left about a thousand of years ago on my xanga, YES. You are my stalker. XD lol
  • Steffeny on July 28, 2004
    Hey dude!just chekin out your page.. pretty colors! Where at in the lovely NC are ya from? Well i'm gonna read a few of yer poems now, see ya around! *StEPhaNIe*
  • on July 7, 2004
    Alex - yes, at last! It is I - Ms. Still. I have been enjoying your thoughtful poetry - just not taking time to login and comment. After the "drive by seeing" you yesterday, I thought it was time. Keep up the great work - and I LOVE the picture to death.
    Edited on Jul 07, 8:33 p.m. because 'mis-spelling'.

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