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Astral FlareShow poetry

Hello and welcome to my profile! My name is Tim and I'll be your host .

Firstly, let me tell you a bit about myself. I'm 21 years old and I live in Orange. I am a full-time student at SCC and I work part-time.

I started writing poetry when I met my beautiful girlfriend, Amy. We're planning on getting married someday . She's my world and I've loved her from the first time I saw her. You'll find that most of my poetry is written about her or for her, but I do have some other stuff, so don't worry-I've got a pretty diverse collection .

I enjoy reading all types of poetry EXCEPT for political poetry and cutting poetry. Political poetry, in my opinion, is nothing short of bashing a person or party while rhyming. It's usually rude and offensive, so I don't enjoy it, sorry. Cutting poetry I don't like to read simply because I am an ex-cutter myself, and this strikes too close to home for me. I'd prefer to forget about that part of my life, and I don't need reminders.

I love meeting people on AP and making new friends. My myspace is reserved only for people I REALLY know and am comfortable with, so please don't be offended if I don't add you as a friend right away. I've also got an AIM screenname, but I'm rarely on.

Right now I am a free member here at AP, but I possibly will be signing up as a silver member-but not until I get at least 10 trophies.

That pretty much sums it up for me! I hope you enjoy reading my work!

PLEASE NOTE: Any bashing of my poetry WILL NOT be tolerated and will be reported immediately. I appreciate constructive criticism-not rude, mindless, hateful words that only intend to be insulting and not helpful.

WHAT'S NEW IN MY WORLD:
6/26/08-I know I haven't written in awhile but I've been VERY busy. In fact, I was almost finished typing out this great poem I thought up when I accidentally hit the 'Back' button. When I got the right screen back, all the words were gone.

Oh well...it just goes to show you that you should always write your poems on paper first. I'll write again when I feel inspired enough to do so.

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  • rawrbby on July 11, 2007
    Your comment made me smile like crazy Thanks for wanting to enter my contest. I'll be sure to check out your poems and add you as a favorite. And I agree...Hey there delilah=amazing The played it the last time I saw them in concert..and I was very happy!
  • E t e r n i t y on October 4, 2006
    thank you so much for reading my poem. Im glad you enjoyed it and Im shocked you read it all Thanks again!

    -Amanda
  • combateye on September 21, 2006
    Emotion is shadow, poetry is the lantern this is so true It would be an honor to read your old work first I know what you mean mine don't get looked at much any more either. I have put you on my favorits so I can start with the first and work my way through I will comment on as many as I can but let me worn you I am not very good at comments they are usely very short
  • Astral Flare on August 19, 2006
    Woot! Obviously it's a sign to be my pal haha! I read your testimony...wow. What a powerful story! I have to make it a point to re-read it again tomorrow morning because my brain refuses to work right now (almost 1 AM) but definitely add me to your favorites list! Take it easy Tim
    -Tim

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