If I have said -paraphrasing- "You are crap!"
You should go look at this for some basic tips...
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- Last seen on Jul 21 4:36 AM 2007. Member since August 2, 2003.
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Pilfering thoughts amidst the rush of the current -
Seven silver moonlight blade kisses -
White roses and dancing poses,
Of all the colours you could paint the sky
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Gabriel the Departed
Violence flashed illuminating the lifeless mutilated corpse of Isabella, Gabriel’s bride to be. An anguished cr -
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The breeze cast itself gently through the now almost bare autumn trees. Pausing for a moment as if waiting f -
1091 lines, 10 comments, February 18, 2005. In <200 lines, Adult
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Arslongavitabre1 on November 10, 2006SLEEP IS FOR THE WEA.. ZZZZZ
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Jbloc Armada. on November 1, 2006wat ever happened to sleep?
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coolchick on July 15, 2006hey ashedscars...i hope your sulbir now...if you remember me,we debated over who's poems were better, well I read some of your writes so far I like them, but the quantity of poems, and trophies cant top the quality of a write...but when you get a chance, when your sulbir, be sure to read my writes to...but honestely we can both be mature and give eachother feedback if you, as an adult would think so.
-a coolchick
