Of a long lost friend
Cause one of these days.
I won't be afraid....
One of these days it all comes together
One of those days that goes on forever
Think I sound crazy? Maybe Whatever
What's it all about?
Gone Crazy..
..Back Never
If you can't move backwards you have two choices, Move forwards or stand still.....
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, and I
I took the one less traveled by
And that made all the difference
Cause one of these days.
I won't be afraid....
One of these days it all comes together
One of those days that goes on forever
Think I sound crazy? Maybe Whatever
What's it all about?
Gone Crazy..
..Back Never
If you can't move backwards you have two choices, Move forwards or stand still.....
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, and I
I took the one less traveled by
And that made all the difference
- Last seen on Nov 18 8:59 PM. Member since December 29, 2002.
- I'm a lapisLazuli dream poet for 349 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Gone crazy......back never".
- I am a 23 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm lost.
- I have 349 comments, 3 contests, 121 poems, 2 stories
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Dirge for a Innocent on September 10, 2008I wish to thank you greatly in reading and commenting on my latest poem, and I will do so for you to.
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Shivers on June 5, 2005umm what can I say. Your comment well its was so, thankyou so much. I spent a good couple of days in my room, baring my all in that poem. I poured everything I had, and well essentially I was a little scared just at the whole truth of it all. But your comment just makes it all worth while.
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Shivers on May 19, 2005ummm just read one of your comments on a poem in the competition, dark/depressing/sad where you commented on it being too long. I wrote a poem for the contest, and you seem pretty clever with the structuring...i just wondered if you could read my poem 'one life' and tell me if I can make it better as the poem mean a lot to me. Thank you if you can.
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Jay-Piksie on February 15, 2004there some hidden satire in it, like how she kills herself only to find that she needs to go back. i also put it in humor because of the comic im starting, shes the main character
