hey,please comment my poems,there not that good though,so don't be too mean
A bit about me:
I'm a little bit crazy lol, and very friendly and quite hyper
But sometimes i must admit that i can be quite a dark person and i can be shy sometimes. i have a mild form of Bipolar called cyclothmia,which means i extreme mood swings,one moment i'm extremely happy and the next i'm angry or extremely sad,i normally get the extremely happy mood swing
At the moment i'm sick of people who take me for granted.
I'm Bisexual and proud of it,if you have a problem with that then you can F**k off !
Isnt it funny that when you go to the shops with your friends,you look down at the girl with black jeans and studs but smile at the girl wearing a mini with a tshirt that barely covers anything?
Isnt it funny you can change your music taste to impress a guy but when it comes to a girl who likes her own music and her own style, you give her a mouthful?
Isnt it funny that a guy can get away with being a gangsta but the emo gets a mouthful from everyone?
are you laughing?
Isnt it funny an emo can be quiet all through the week but gets more **** from everyone than the girl who sleeps around and sells her virginity?
Isnt it funny that you dont mind your friends drinking, smoking but the minute someone mentions emo music you can give them a lecture on melodramatic teenage outcasts?
i'm not laughing...
Its so funny that you and your friends can make a girls life hell and not know anything about the silent battle she might be fighting.
Isnt it funny that you can call emos, punks, goths the retards but still manage to get through your day without an inch of guilt in your heart.
HOW YOU CAN CALL A GIRL A POSER, HOW CAN YOU SAY "YOUR NOT EMO" OR "ATTENTION SEEKER" WITHOUT SPENDING A SECOND TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHY THERE ARE CUTS ON HER WRISTS AND WHY SHE SPENDS HER LUNCHTIMES CRYING INSTEAD OR LAUGHING WITH HER FRIENDS?
keep on laughing...
Isnt it funny you can say and do all this without any idea of what is going on in this persons life,
without knowing her situation with her friends or her family or her LIFE
BRAVE ISNT GOING UP ON STAGE AND STRIPPING
BRAVE IS NOT SAYING A SPEECH OR DUMPING YOUR BOYFRIEND
BRAVE IS
GOING TO SCHOOL EVERYDAY AND NOT FOR A SECOND CARE WHAT THE ****S AROUND YOU ARE SAYING ABOUT YOUR CLOTHES.
ITS LISTENING TO YOUR OWN MUSIC AND BEING PROUD OF IT
ITS GOING THROUGH EVERY DAY WITH THE THINGS PEOPLE SAY TO YOUR FACE AND BEHIND YOUR BACK AND YOU STILL KEEP QUIET
ITS KNOWING WHAT YOUR "FRIENDS" ARE SAYING ABOUT YOU AND STILL CALLING THEM YOUR FRIENDS
BRAVE IS KNOWING THAT TOMOROW ISNT A BRIGHT AND HAPPY FUTURE
ITS ANOTHER DAY OF ****ING AND DODGING RUMORS
keep on laughing
if you agree put this on your page.

A bit about me:
I'm a little bit crazy lol, and very friendly and quite hyper
But sometimes i must admit that i can be quite a dark person and i can be shy sometimes. i have a mild form of Bipolar called cyclothmia,which means i extreme mood swings,one moment i'm extremely happy and the next i'm angry or extremely sad,i normally get the extremely happy mood swing

At the moment i'm sick of people who take me for granted.
I'm Bisexual and proud of it,if you have a problem with that then you can F**k off !
Isnt it funny that when you go to the shops with your friends,you look down at the girl with black jeans and studs but smile at the girl wearing a mini with a tshirt that barely covers anything?
Isnt it funny you can change your music taste to impress a guy but when it comes to a girl who likes her own music and her own style, you give her a mouthful?
Isnt it funny that a guy can get away with being a gangsta but the emo gets a mouthful from everyone?
are you laughing?
Isnt it funny an emo can be quiet all through the week but gets more **** from everyone than the girl who sleeps around and sells her virginity?
Isnt it funny that you dont mind your friends drinking, smoking but the minute someone mentions emo music you can give them a lecture on melodramatic teenage outcasts?
i'm not laughing...
Its so funny that you and your friends can make a girls life hell and not know anything about the silent battle she might be fighting.
Isnt it funny that you can call emos, punks, goths the retards but still manage to get through your day without an inch of guilt in your heart.
HOW YOU CAN CALL A GIRL A POSER, HOW CAN YOU SAY "YOUR NOT EMO" OR "ATTENTION SEEKER" WITHOUT SPENDING A SECOND TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHY THERE ARE CUTS ON HER WRISTS AND WHY SHE SPENDS HER LUNCHTIMES CRYING INSTEAD OR LAUGHING WITH HER FRIENDS?
keep on laughing...
Isnt it funny you can say and do all this without any idea of what is going on in this persons life,
without knowing her situation with her friends or her family or her LIFE
BRAVE ISNT GOING UP ON STAGE AND STRIPPING
BRAVE IS NOT SAYING A SPEECH OR DUMPING YOUR BOYFRIEND
BRAVE IS
GOING TO SCHOOL EVERYDAY AND NOT FOR A SECOND CARE WHAT THE ****S AROUND YOU ARE SAYING ABOUT YOUR CLOTHES.
ITS LISTENING TO YOUR OWN MUSIC AND BEING PROUD OF IT
ITS GOING THROUGH EVERY DAY WITH THE THINGS PEOPLE SAY TO YOUR FACE AND BEHIND YOUR BACK AND YOU STILL KEEP QUIET
ITS KNOWING WHAT YOUR "FRIENDS" ARE SAYING ABOUT YOU AND STILL CALLING THEM YOUR FRIENDS
BRAVE IS KNOWING THAT TOMOROW ISNT A BRIGHT AND HAPPY FUTURE
ITS ANOTHER DAY OF ****ING AND DODGING RUMORS
keep on laughing
if you agree put this on your page.
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- I'm a aventurine thought poet for 46 comments.
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, and quote is "oh,they say love is the centre of existence but i say love is the centre of dispair and pain.". - I am a 16 year old girl (Great Britain)
- When I'm not writing, I'm in school or exploring the depths of my mind..

- I am in the groups Demon lair, Moon Forrest, The Rainbow Club, hope high school, the power of darkness
- I have 46 comments, 1 column, 19 poems
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I can hear the rain
crying down my window panes,33 lines, 3 comments, July 7. In Abstract, Freewrite, Nature, My own style, Lost in thought, Thoughts -
You don't know me yet
but nor do i know you25 lines, 1 comment, July 4. In Hope, Love, Teenage thinking, Romance, Longing, Weird, Fantasy, My own style, Abstract
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- Column: Poem: My heart beating in your chest. at allpoetry
This poem is written by me about someone who i truly love,
and i wanted comments on the poem because i'm going to show him the poem, so i want it to be the best it can be.
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sophia moonfairy on April 17Hello, Alice thanks so much for the sweet comment ^^ I am glad you like it
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Unholy emo 666 on February 12You are awesome!! lol! i love your oic! it si cool! sorry about all of the!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rhythm Child on November 16, 2008Your poems are brilliant
keep writing
Rhythm Child
